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- Fri Apr 17, 2015 5:38 pm
- Forum: IELTS related discussion
- Topic: How to manage time in writing test for academic IELTS
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2874
Re: How to manage time in writing test for academic IELTS
Hi akshay, Those who write IELTS, most of them faces the same problem so you are no different. I am also having the same problem. But I learned something, in my case, the main reasons for this problem are lack of ideas and words. I have experienced that when I practice essays related to language and...
- Wed Apr 15, 2015 4:49 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please rate this writing essay 2
- Replies: 0
- Views: 7839
Please rate this writing essay 2
Question: The state of the environment is now a cause for concern in all countries across the world. Apart from government measures and policies what can individuals do on a personnel level to combat the negative effects that our life styles have on the environment Environment is deteriorating at an...
- Tue Apr 14, 2015 4:31 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please help me correcting my essay.
- Replies: 1
- Views: 675
Re: Please help me correcting my essay.
Hi Ranjijm, I am not an expert, but based on my knowledge and experience I would like to suggest some points. It was a very good try. You have supported your arguments with good examples. However, I believe, in the second paragraph one example is sufficient. Of course it should be lucid and appropri...
- Tue Apr 14, 2015 2:03 pm
- Forum: IELTS related discussion
- Topic: Speaking practice partner target band (7-8)
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1395
Speaking practice partner target band (7-8)
My name is Anshuman. I am a post graduate student at IIT Roorkee. My exam is on 30th April. I need to practice speaking section of IELTS Academic module. I believe this will help us to score better (7+). My skype ID is anshuman.sharma.30. Thanks for considering this.
Regards,
Anshuman
Regards,
Anshuman
- Fri Apr 10, 2015 1:01 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Task 2 Writing (Target Band 8+) 3rd
- Replies: 13
- Views: 4008
Re: Task 2 Writing (Target Band 8+) 3rd
Hi bas,
Again, a very informative essay. I have learned many things. But, there are some clerical errors.
regards,
Anshuman Sharma
Again, a very informative essay. I have learned many things. But, there are some clerical errors.
regards,
Anshuman Sharma
- Fri Apr 10, 2015 12:44 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Essay Task 2 Please assess!!!
- Replies: 2
- Views: 16256
Re: Essay Task 2 Please assess!!!
Hey Bas,
Thanks for your valuable suggestions. I also noticed that my sentence structures are monotonous . I support your point to make my examples more specific. Also, I am working on my grammar too.
Cheers,
Ansh
Thanks for your valuable suggestions. I also noticed that my sentence structures are monotonous . I support your point to make my examples more specific. Also, I am working on my grammar too.
Cheers,
Ansh
- Fri Apr 10, 2015 6:58 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Essay Task 2 Please assess!!!
- Replies: 2
- Views: 16256
Essay Task 2 Please assess!!!
Question: We live in a world in which we are constantly exposed to advertising. To what extent does advertising influence our choice as consumers, and what effect does it have on our lifestyles? Discuss this issue and give your opinion. In today’s world, the customers are always confronted with the ...
- Fri Apr 10, 2015 6:06 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please comment and rate this writing task 2- essay
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1251
Re: Please comment and rate this writing task 2- essay
Thanks a lot for your suggestions.
This was my first attempt. From next time, I will incorporate your worthy points.
This was my first attempt. From next time, I will incorporate your worthy points.
- Wed Apr 08, 2015 4:29 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Task 2 Writing (Target Band 8+)
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2279
Re: Task 2 Writing (Target Band 8+)
hi bas,
Your essay is complete in almost all respects. I believe its a good example of an essay which is cohesive as well as coherent. I am not a tutor but as per my knowledge and experience you should get an 8+. However, there is always scope for improvements.
regards,
Anshuman
Your essay is complete in almost all respects. I believe its a good example of an essay which is cohesive as well as coherent. I am not a tutor but as per my knowledge and experience you should get an 8+. However, there is always scope for improvements.
regards,
Anshuman
- Tue Apr 07, 2015 12:49 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please comment and rate this writing task 2- essay
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1251
Please comment and rate this writing task 2- essay
Please review this writing task 2. Do suggest which band I may get based on this. Suggestions are welcomed. Question: There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard ever...
- Sat Apr 04, 2015 10:03 am
- Forum: IELTS related discussion
- Topic: Hello, I need a study partner for IELTS band 7+
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1543
Re: Hello, I need a study partner for IELTS band 7+
Hi, My name is Anshuman. I am a post graduate student at IIT Roorkee. My exam is on 30th April. I need to practice speaking section of IELTS Academic module. I believe this will help me to score better (7+). My skype ID is anshuman.sharma.30. I am ready to practice with all of you. Thanks for consid...
- Sat Apr 04, 2015 9:56 am
- Forum: IELTS related discussion
- Topic: IELTS speaking partner (7+)
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3066
Re: IELTS speaking partner (7+)
Hi all, My name is Anshuman. I am a post graduate student at IIT Roorkee. My exam is on 30th April. I need to practice speaking section of IELTS Academic module. I believe this will help me to score better (7+). My skype ID is anshuman.sharma.30. I am ready to practice with all of you. Thanks for co...
- Sat Apr 04, 2015 6:23 am
- Forum: Post your speaking
- Topic: Please help critique my speech!!
- Replies: 3
- Views: 10406
Re: Please help critique my speech!!
Hi, I am also a student and I don't possess much credentials to review your speech, but I am trying to suggest some points. First of all, it was a very good attempt. You mentioned about your prof., how long you have known him, how he helped you to select your carrier path etc. I believe you lack lit...