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by Jem_Asi
Sun Apr 12, 2015 1:48 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please critic My Essay and guide me how to improve it.
Replies: 2
Views: 512

Re: Please critic My Essay and guide me how to improve it.

Thank you for your comments about my essay wrting. I appreciate that.
by Jem_Asi
Sat Apr 11, 2015 1:12 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please critic My Essay and guide me how to improve it.
Replies: 2
Views: 512

Please critic My Essay and guide me how to improve it.

Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem? Today, violence and antisocial behavior are extremely viral in the society. It is believed that many people are not afraid of commiting crimes after the...
by Jem_Asi
Sat Apr 11, 2015 8:42 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly rate my essay writing. Thank you
Replies: 3
Views: 631

Re: Kindly rate my essay writing. Thank you

Kindly correct my essay so i can improve it.
Thank you. I need 7 bandscore in writing.
by Jem_Asi
Tue Apr 07, 2015 7:59 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly rate my essay writing. Thank you
Replies: 3
Views: 631

Re: 1. What are the benefits of living in big cities, as opp

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by Jem_Asi
Tue Apr 07, 2015 7:07 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Kindly rate my essay writing. Thank you
Replies: 3
Views: 631

Kindly rate my essay writing. Thank you

Wrtiting task 2 question: What are the benefits of living in big cities, as opposed to rural areas? What are the problems of rural areas and how can they be solved? Comfortable accomodation and safe environment are both important factors for the people worth living. It happens today that some people...