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by zalak
Fri Apr 10, 2015 1:31 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 Writing (Target Band 8+) 3rd
Replies: 13
Views: 4039

Re: Task 2 Writing (Target Band 8+) 3rd

Hi bas, I would say this is a good piece of work. I really liked reading through it. Plus points for giving different examples each for the advantages and disadvantages. Flow of the words and ideas was smooth, but, there were some minor grammatical mistakes (but these didn't block my understanding o...
by zalak
Fri Apr 10, 2015 10:57 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing section: Task 1 essays
Replies: 2
Views: 685

Re: Writing section: Task 1 essays

kamots89 wrote:Not an expert, but i think in the pie charts you should compare the 2 state because they have the same variables to increase your score in TA.
Thanks for the suggestion kamots89. I'll keep that in mind. What's your say about the other works of mine?
by zalak
Thu Apr 09, 2015 11:05 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing section: Task 2 essays
Replies: 0
Views: 448

Writing section: Task 2 essays

Hello All, Following is my work in Task 2 essays. Essay 1 (343 words) Task 2_1.png It need not always be about getting paid for a thing one does. At times it’s about human morals, social responsibility and kindness. I strongly support this statement. High school kids are in their teenage period wher...
by zalak
Thu Apr 09, 2015 10:59 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing section: Task 1 essays
Replies: 2
Views: 685

Writing section: Task 1 essays

Hello All, A big thanks to Ryan and other community members for this helpful platform for IELTS preparation. I look forward to using it very well and also returning the favour. Can I please request the community members and Ryan (if he has the time) to please comment and mark my essay? All the essay...