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I wont go that far few corrections ------------------ Thus, such policy could bring peace and order to the ("a") society. Take, Kentucky, for example, a civilian has ("had") been executed for murdering a family, but after several years the person was found "faultless"....

csehgal wrote:I am quite certain that this could be a level 8.5 band essay.

Thank you so much for the estimated score csehgal! But ive considered the fact that i still have many corrections which could probably lower my score. Nonetheless, I'm grateful for your helpful response!

please help me with my essay, i will be taking the exam next week, I'm quite anxious about my writing, i hope anyone could try to comment about my work , thank you in advance! target band score: 7+ Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, a...

hello, Matilda,although i am no expert at this,but I will just provide some suggested corrections that might help: a couple of decades ago it would be much better if you place an end statement that will summarize your ideas in every body paragraph in your conclusion, i think the idea of "not to...

thank you so much Matilda for your meaningful suggestions, I will try to rephrase my work and apply it for my next essays.

hi, Asadurk,my suggestion in your revised essay would involve english contractions, I think it is safer not to use contractions like "it's for it is , that's for that is", instead write the words in complete format so that it may appear formal for the essay.

Personally,I have found your work very remarkable. In my humble opinion, although you've placed synonyms, I have noticed that you have used the words "university education" several times,specially, in the intro, I am not expert at this but my suggestion would be, perhaps, to replace some o...

What a great essay you have , you have given specific examples relevant to the topic and have used complex sentence structures and vocabulary words that are quite sophisticated, I wish i could make such an essay as this good. From my modest perspective, you might reach the target band score with thi...

Thank you very much terry3218 for these suggested corrections! This will be a great help for my next essays .. I'm looking forward for other member's opinion regarding my work

hello, everyone! I am a new member here. I would like to request the experts and other members to please evaluate my first essay and estimate the possible band score if possible. Thank You so much in advance! :) Some parents allow their teenage children to live independently, away from home. Other p...