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Hi David, recently i appeared for my speaking test and to my surprize it was to fast. Examiner was jumping from one topic to another and i felt I was not given enough time to speak and explain my answers. I was often interrupted. My test was done in less than 10 mins !!!!. Is this they way test are ...

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Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nation’s history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by news ones. How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress? My attempt In today’s world it is seen that many governments are wo...

Hi David, Could you tell us, 1.What approx number error means few errors/occasional error? Is wrong article counted as an error? 2. I read somewhere you said "essay grading as per their computer system". When you say computer system , essay is evaluated by system or human? 3. Do they look ...

Hi i feel if you add one more sentence to reinforce your idea , essay will become more impressive. Ex :- Lastly for their own publicity, and to draw the attention of the young minds, Artists may proceed to draw and picturise women in an unethical way, that is by posting vulgar pictures in their maga...

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first letter does not answer "explain why you have moved".
in terms of task achievement you might loose marks.

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Hi Avijit, I'm no expert in English, my spelling and grammar sucks, but I have some comments. In the opening we can clearly se why or what you are writing about, which is good. but you have some formulations that can be improved to be more clear. I would also try to write it in a more neutral tone,...

You have visited another city in your country. Prior to the visit you requested some information from a tourist centre, but the information was incorrect. Write a letter to the manager of the centre and say - What information were you looking for? - What was incorrect in it? - What happened to you b...

Hi Can you please provide feedback on my attempt. Hi Kate, I hope you enjoying your vacation and hope this letter finds you in a good mood. I am writing this to invite you to a party and tell you good news in office. We have decided to celebrate my son's first birthday. Although he completed his one...

Hi there, A reasonably high standard essay. I suggest that you consider using 'comma' more to improve the reading flow of the essay. For example: - ‘unlike cash cards are easy to handle and provide flexibility’ – comma between ‘cash’ and ‘cards’ ‘In addition to that, unlike cash it is easy to keep ...

Nowadays plastic money replacements such as credit and debit cards are extremely popular, even more than banknotes and coins. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Include your personal opinion and examples based on your own experience. In this modern era, people are readily accepting ne...

New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumer. To what extent do you agree of disagree with this opinion. New technologies, in particular the Internet has changed the world we live in. Undoubtedly, these advances plays a prominent role in global trade and com...

Hi , Query Regarding General task 2 1. Is is true that if we write more words >275 we get more marks and to get a band of 8 approx 300 words should be written? 2. If we write introduction para using few words from question , that is not counted as word count? Is this correct? 3. Is space given suffi...

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Hi, 1.I find this essay very easy to follow and your points were very clear. 2., but sometimes its practicle impossible --- it is "practically" . Could you pls provide ur feedback on mine. In today's world majority of the companies face a difficult task, how to to decision making?. It is f...

hi , 1.In conclusion : - why it is important to believe ? why u want reader to believe ? In my view it should be just " it is important. 2."Recent research" i guess it should be researches. As you are referring to be specific research 3.I think in second para to continue the flow you ...

Hi All Test Takers, We really want our work to be evaluated and that is the main reason we are posting our writings here. I could see lot of people posting but there is no feedback and suggestions. Everybody is just reading the task and providing no inputs for improvement. I did not get any feedback...

Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice.Write a letter to your friend in your letter -say why a driving letter is advantageous -recommend a driving school -give any extra guidance/tips Below is my attempt:- Dear John, I am glad to know that you are planning to lear...

Hi I like the way you have introduce the topic " lets take a deep dive on this thought, but looks like this is a short essay. Morover if you see the standard essay it is in always in 4 para's . This essay has two diff ides which can be splitted in two para. In addition to that - in my view a be...

HI , I am also new to essay writing. My few observation are below. 1.authority should impose --- authorities , should be pural in my view. 2.Due to poor regulator -- poor regulations 3.This can be easily evident -- this is evident. 4.deforestation which had leads to an increase -- has lead to . 5.bu...

Question : - Few peoepl devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effects this has on the individual and the society in general. My essay :- A hobby is a way to spend spare time constructively and creatively. From historical ages, people engage themselves to learn ...

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WRT second arguement , how technology has made transportation quicker is not clear.
Para is telling importance of transportation , how is it related to tech?
Trasportation is not technology !!!!.

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My thoughts:- 1."It has been a hot debate " looks incorrect - It has been debated a lot. 2. Intro first sentense is too long and difficult to follow. 3. until this process will repeat himself or process repeats itself ? 4. wich spelling is incorrect. 5. "First of all, a crucial import...

Hi Below is my ans. Pls evaluate. " Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction for the recently conducted " Auto CAD design course". This was a hands on experience course conducted by Master Design Institute. I regret to tell you that the arrangements done ...

well in the context which u hv written i feel " strict attendance record should be taken, and people who who have enrolled in advance should only be allowed to attend the class. No last minute entry should be allowed, supervisor shd ensure etc " may sound appropriate . BTW how are when is ...