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by Anna2198
Sat Jul 04, 2015 12:53 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 1 Hope someone can improve this Bar chart essay
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Writing task 1 Hope someone can improve this Bar chart essay

The bar chart compares the expenditure on three items among citizens aged from 0 to 75+ in the UK in 2004. A steady upward spending trend in food and drink can be seen as the age increased. People under 30 years old spent 5% of their budget while people aged from 30 to 45 spent 13% of the total expe...
by Anna2198
Sat Jul 04, 2015 12:49 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can Some one improve this table writing essay? Thanks
Replies: 1
Views: 1855

Can Some one improve this table writing essay? Thanks

The table compares the consumption and production of potatoes in five areas in 2006. From the first table, it can be seen that the individual consumption in Europe was the highest-96.1 kg per person, almost doubled than that in North America-57.9 kg per person. The personal consumption of potatoes i...