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by reidun
Mon Jul 20, 2015 7:36 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please review essay
Replies: 1
Views: 596

please review essay

task: 1.Recent advancements in technology have led to many changes in our daily lives, but some people would argue that we are becoming too dependent on technology and that not all these changes are beneficial. Give your opinion and support your argument. Reviews would greatly appreciated, both on c...
by reidun
Mon Jul 20, 2015 5:26 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: chart description, plz review
Replies: 2
Views: 634

Re: chart description, plz review

Thank you Arsh, for constructive feedbak
by reidun
Sun Jul 19, 2015 5:26 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: chart description, plz review
Replies: 2
Views: 634

chart description, plz review

Hi, This is one of my attempt so discribe a graph as a practice sample, the graph is found here: https://www.ielts.org/PDF/120430_academic_writing_task_1A.pdf I found this task difficult because of the complexity with different values according to gender, year, type of education and of course time i...
by reidun
Sun Jul 19, 2015 3:20 pm
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: ielts 25th July study group
Replies: 32
Views: 10724

Re: ielts 25th July study group

hi, I am taking the IELTS academic test in London on the 25th of July. just got notice this week that i had to do it - so I'm starting to get a bit stressed about it. Does any of you know what the IELTS trends are at the moment regarding questions and theme for the writing part? thanks for all answe...
by reidun
Sun Jul 19, 2015 3:10 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please critique my letter
Replies: 11
Views: 4930

Re: Please critique my letter

Hi terry3218, I just have one short little comment on clearity. you are inviting some friends to a party, and suddenly out of the blue you are having an exam? It does not fit with the rest of the text this is the setence I'm refering to: For the court has ordered my employer to allow me to take 15 d...
by reidun
Sun Jul 19, 2015 2:56 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: GT Task one :- pls review and provide feedback
Replies: 2
Views: 989

Re: GT Task one :- pls review and provide feedback

Hi Avijit, I'm no expert in English, my spelling and grammar sucks, but I have some comments. In the opening we can clearly se why or what you are writing about, which is good. but you have some formulations that can be improved to be more clear. I would also try to write it in a more neutral tone, ...