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Hi Chi and fellow aspirants, One more for your suggestions and corrections. I deliberately skipped few sentences from the standard format of essay because the essay was already big in size. Question: Nowadays for many people the Internet is replacing regular books. What do you think will happen in t...

Hi Chi, Thanks for your time and comments. If you correct, I would stand corrected. If you suggest, I would be enriching my vocabulary or sentence phrasing skills. I do accept with you on all the points you made. Please refer below another essay I attempted keeping your suggestions and corrections i...

Thanks Chi for quoting about the spirit with which one has to take criticism, and I do take it the same way. Firstly, do take time for slumber and revitalize yourself. Next, I did go through Ryan video on your suggestion and I must tell you that it did help me a lot in how to structure my essay. I t...

Topic : A study revealed that children are spending most of their time watching television. Do you think this is a positive trend ? Essay : A study revealed that children are spending most of their free time watching television. I personally opine that this is not a good trend as not all television ...

Hi, The question is Do you think this is a good idea? Are cash incentives a good way to motivate employees? Your quote is This essay will look at some arguments for and against the money bonuses as a motivational factor for employees. I guess while they clearly asked your opinion you discussed pros ...

@chi, Thanks for the writeup with opposite stand. More than your English, I am impressed with the flow of thought and assertiveness in your essay. Just curious to know the time you took to compose this essay. I will continue to post more essays. Please do complement them in whatever way you can. Tha...

@Online English teacher, Thanks a lot for the detailed review. You pointed out some mistakes which i commit sometimes knowingly and sometimes unknowingly. Your heads up will help me in being more conscious in my next writing practice task. Feeling privileged to share platform with you. I will post m...

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With so many disadvantages of home schooling, I feel home schooling has become largely irrelevant in modern society and cannot serve the purpose efficiently

Hi Folks, Very delighted to be here. I find this a great platform to collaborate with fellow IELTS aspirants and leverage their English knowledge to succeed and help them succeed in achieving target bands. As a first step I am posting my first ever attempt of general writing. It took me almost one h...