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- Tue Aug 18, 2015 6:05 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please check my Essay
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Re: Please check my Essay
Congratulations, Structure of the essay is good. Considering subject, you have used a perfect vocabulary set. I do not think that you should have written a sentence starting with "My opinion is.." to give your opinion. It is there in the second and last paragraph that you believe individua...