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by shoaibyounis
Sat Oct 10, 2015 5:39 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can someone please review my Letter: 10-OCT
Replies: 1
Views: 775

Can someone please review my Letter: 10-OCT

Topic: You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter - Explain why you want to take time off work - Give details of the amount of time you need - Suggest how your work could be covered while ...
by shoaibyounis
Sat Oct 10, 2015 5:38 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can someone please review my Essay: 10-OCT
Replies: 1
Views: 889

Can someone please review my Essay: 10-OCT

Topic: Being a celebrity – such as a famous film star or sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems? Response: Being a famous personality like Brad Pitt or Steven Gerrard tends to have good as well as bad points...
by shoaibyounis
Sat Oct 10, 2015 1:55 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can someone please review my Essay: 08-OCT
Replies: 2
Views: 813

Re: Can someone please review my Essay: 08-OCT

I completed it in 30 minutes.
by shoaibyounis
Thu Oct 08, 2015 2:23 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can someone please review my Letter: 08-OCT
Replies: 1
Views: 643

Can someone please review my Letter: 08-OCT

Topic: On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter - Describe the item you lost - Explain how you lost it - Tell the insurance company what you would li...
by shoaibyounis
Thu Oct 08, 2015 2:21 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can someone please review my Essay: 08-OCT
Replies: 2
Views: 813

Can someone please review my Essay: 08-OCT

Topic: Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Response: Increase in the school fee structure has resulted in a common belief that financial education should be made a compulsory part of its program. I do...
by shoaibyounis
Tue Oct 06, 2015 6:05 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can someone please review my Essay: 06-OCT
Replies: 3
Views: 786

Re: Can someone please review my Essay: 06-OCT

Thanks for your feedback dear. Noted :)
by shoaibyounis
Tue Oct 06, 2015 6:03 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can someone please review my Letter: 05-OCT
Replies: 2
Views: 794

Re: Can someone please review my Letter: 05-OCT

Thanks for the feedback dear.
by shoaibyounis
Tue Oct 06, 2015 2:44 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can someone please review my Essay: 06-OCT
Replies: 3
Views: 786

Can someone please review my Essay: 06-OCT

Topic: Public libraries should only provide books and should not waste their limited resources on expensive high-tech media such as software, videos or DVDs. Do you agree or disagree? Response: Library holds an immense reservoir of knowledge and history, resulting in a widely accepted theory that it...
by shoaibyounis
Mon Oct 05, 2015 2:45 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can someone please review my Letter: 05-OCT
Replies: 2
Views: 794

Can someone please review my Letter: 05-OCT

Topic: You recently went to a trip with a friend and you both took some photographs. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - Ask your friend to send you one of the photographs - Explain why you need this particular photograph - And tell your friend what happened to your copy of it. Response:...
by shoaibyounis
Mon Oct 05, 2015 2:38 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can someone please review my Essay: 05-OCT
Replies: 0
Views: 1879

Can someone please review my Essay: 05-OCT

Topic: In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? Response: Increase in the rate of obesity among people has greatly impacted th...
by shoaibyounis
Sun Oct 04, 2015 5:22 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can someone please review my Letter
Replies: 1
Views: 621

Can someone please review my Letter

Topic: You and your family are moving to another country and you are looking for a rented accommodation there. Write a letter to property agent. In your letter: - Introduce yourself and your family - Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find. - Give your preferences for the location o...
by shoaibyounis
Sun Oct 04, 2015 5:20 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can someone please review my Essay
Replies: 0
Views: 1633

Can someone please review my Essay

Topic: Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective? Response: Dramatic increase in the number of vehicles on roads and pollution caused by them causes an a...
by shoaibyounis
Sat Oct 03, 2015 5:08 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my Writing Task II: 03-OCT-2015
Replies: 0
Views: 1696

Please assess my Writing Task II: 03-OCT-2015

Topic: Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development? Response: Social media like facebook, twitter and instagram has greatly cha...
by shoaibyounis
Fri Oct 02, 2015 6:52 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my Writing Task 2
Replies: 0
Views: 1667

Please assess my Writing Task 2

Topic: Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Response Parents and teachers act as a role model for children, hence their presenc...
by shoaibyounis
Fri Oct 02, 2015 5:51 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my Writing Task 2
Replies: 1
Views: 632

Please assess my Writing Task 2

Topic: Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Response: Extinction of traditional languages over time has a very minimal effect ...
by shoaibyounis
Thu Oct 01, 2015 3:30 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my Writing Task 2
Replies: 1
Views: 750

Please assess my Writing Task 2

Topic: Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Other, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Response: It is a known f...
by shoaibyounis
Wed Sep 30, 2015 3:27 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my Writing Task 2
Replies: 2
Views: 879

Please assess my Writing Task 2

Topic: Some people believe that unpaid community services should be a compulsory part of the high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree? Response: Freelance services like help...
by shoaibyounis
Tue Sep 29, 2015 6:26 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can some please assess my Writing Task 2...!
Replies: 3
Views: 1311

Can some please assess my Writing Task 2...!

Topic: Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Response: Foreign languages like French, German etc. play an important role in the grooming of an indi...
by shoaibyounis
Wed Sep 16, 2015 12:37 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can someone review my argument Essay
Replies: 2
Views: 830

Re: Can someone review my argument Essay

Thanks Paul for your valuable input.
by shoaibyounis
Mon Sep 14, 2015 5:29 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can someone review my argument Essay
Replies: 2
Views: 830

Can someone review my argument Essay

Hi All I have written an argument essay in order to achieve a band of 8 in writing. Can someone please review my work and let me know if my mistakes. Also let me know if the attachment is not clear so that I can write it on my computer and share again. Thanks for everyone's support. Regards Shoaib B...
by shoaibyounis
Wed Sep 09, 2015 5:42 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Hello everyone
Replies: 2
Views: 1666

Hello everyone

Hi all, my name is Shoaib and I am currently living in the Kingdom of Bahrain. I want to apply for immigration and for that I need an IELTS score of 8 in all modules. I hope this forum will be helpful in getting me to my desired results.