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by allison
Fri Oct 16, 2015 3:00 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please hlep me to mark on my essay, thank you (academic t1)
Replies: 0
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Please hlep me to mark on my essay, thank you (academic t1)

Given are four pie charts providing a comparison of the age percentage of population among Yemen and Italy in 2000, as well as the projections for 2050. According to the pie chart of Yemen in 2000, the age from 0 to 14 years old is 50.1% which is the biggest group among the three ages of groups. Com...
by allison
Sun Oct 11, 2015 10:24 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can someone help me to correct my essay? Thank you (Academic task 1)
Replies: 2
Views: 994

Re: Can someone help me to correct my essay? Thank you (Academic task 1)

Thank you for your help, @Paul Davey ! the comment is really clear and helpful !
by allison
Sat Oct 10, 2015 5:25 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can someone help me to correct my essay? Thank you (Academic task 1)
Replies: 2
Views: 994

Can someone help me to correct my essay? Thank you (Academic task 1)

Given is a chart providing a comparison of time spent of telephone in three types in the UK from 1995 to 2002. It is apparent that the local fixed line has the highest total time of telephone calls among the three categories from 1995 to 2002. Furthermore, it reaches the peak at 90 billion minutes i...
by allison
Wed Sep 16, 2015 9:38 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Ielts, task 1. Can someone correct my essay please? i want to improve my writing skills
Replies: 3
Views: 832

Ielts, task 1. Can someone correct my essay please? i want to improve my writing skills

The first graph provided reveals the different sectors of global water use from 1900 to 2000, while the second table compared the water consumption between Brazil and Congo in 2000. It is evident that the global water use saw a steadily increase, however, the gap between each sector were getting wid...