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by lingxia
Sun Dec 20, 2015 10:22 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: Looking for a speaking partner for IELTS exam in Feburary
Replies: 4
Views: 2472

Looking for a speaking partner for IELTS exam in Feburary

I am in Melbourne Australia and only available in the evening please contact me on skype xialing02 if you are in the similar time zone. I have latest topics to share with you if you need I already got 7 in speaking on the IELTS exam last month. Therefore, I am looking for the person who is in the sa...
by lingxia
Sun Nov 15, 2015 10:24 am
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: Part 1+2+3(home,film spending time alone)please give you valuable feedback
Replies: 10
Views: 16178

Re: Part 1+2+3(home,film spending time alone)please give you valuable feedback

You had a nice introduction to this answer. Well done. Here are some notes on the last recording about the differences between males and females when they give gifts: --They are the one - ONES -- Buy gift to the other – buy A gift for ANOTHER PERSON/SOMEONE --Men and women different when choosing g...
by lingxia
Sat Nov 07, 2015 1:57 pm
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: Part 1+2+3(home,film spending time alone)please give you valuable feedback
Replies: 10
Views: 16178

Re: Part 1+2+3(home,film spending time alone)please give you valuable feedback

willhunting, Thank you for your feedback. Yes, I am from China. I do have problems with endings and th.words. I am working on it.

This is not my pets. They are magpies on the roof... LOL
by lingxia
Sat Oct 10, 2015 6:06 am
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: Part 1+2+3(home,film spending time alone)please give you valuable feedback
Replies: 10
Views: 16178

Re: Part 1+2+3(home,filmd spending time along)please give you valuable feedback

http://www.ieltsnetwork.com/download/file.php?id=674 • Do you think females are more likely to place importance on giving gifts than males? FQ • (Similar to above) Do you think females give gifts more often than males? FQ • Are men and women different when choosing gifts? FQx2 • What factors do peo...
by lingxia
Sat Oct 10, 2015 4:09 am
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: Part 1+2+3(home,film spending time alone)please give you valuable feedback
Replies: 10
Views: 16178

Re: Part 1(home,film and spending time along)+part 2 please give you valuable feedback

http://www.ieltsnetwork.com/download/file.php?id=673 Film • Do you watch (many) films (movies)? • What kinds of films do you like? • Did you like (or watch) the same kinds of films when you were a child (or, when you were younger)? • When was the last time you watched a film in a cinema? • How ofte...
by lingxia
Sat Oct 10, 2015 4:06 am
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: Part 1+2+3(home,film spending time alone)please give you valuable feedback
Replies: 10
Views: 16178

Re: Part 1(home,film and spending time along)+part 2 please give you valuable feedback

http://www.ieltsnetwork.com/download/file.php?id=672 Part 1 Home • Do you live in a house, or a flat (= an apartment)? • Could you describe it a little? • What do you think are the advantages of living in a ______ ? (flat or house, whichever you live in). • What are the differences between the plac...
by lingxia
Sat Oct 10, 2015 3:42 am
Forum: Post your speaking
Topic: Part 1+2+3(home,film spending time alone)please give you valuable feedback
Replies: 10
Views: 16178

Part 1+2+3(home,film spending time alone)please give you valuable feedback

http://www.ieltsnetwork.com/download/file.php?id=671 A Gift that Took a Long Time to Choose (May, 2015) Describe a gift you gave that took a long time to choose. You should say: what it was who you gave it to how you chose it and explain why you spent a long time choosing it. * or and explain how t...
by lingxia
Thu Oct 08, 2015 1:10 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 internet , thank you for giving the feedback
Replies: 2
Views: 1111

Task 2 internet , thank you for giving the feedback

QQ图片20151009000819.png It is undeniable that the advent of internet has greatly facilitated people’s lives in the most unimaginable way. While people enjoy the convenience that internet bring to us, it also cause a series of problems Admittedly, internet can be beneficial for individuals and societ...
by lingxia
Tue Oct 06, 2015 12:19 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: TASK2
Replies: 2
Views: 817

Re: TASK2

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by lingxia
Fri Oct 02, 2015 11:03 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my Writing Task 2
Replies: 1
Views: 619

Re: Please assess my Writing Task 2

hi, I just put my essay here as a example. It seems that you do not have a clear idea about how to construct a IELTS essay yet. I suggest that you watch Rain's free videos first before you start writing. Understand Task 1 and 2 structure and how the IELTS Writing test works https://www.youtube.com/p...
by lingxia
Thu Oct 01, 2015 1:20 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my Writing Task 2
Replies: 2
Views: 867

Re: Please assess my Writing Task 2

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by lingxia
Wed Sep 30, 2015 2:55 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can some please assess my Writing Task 2...!
Replies: 3
Views: 1296

Re: Can some please assess my Writing Task 2...!

I put my own essay here for your review. it is not a model essay though. It is undeniable that being able to speak a foreign language is an essential element of individual and social development. Some people therefore suggest that children should be given language lessons as early as possible. I fun...
by lingxia
Wed Sep 30, 2015 2:52 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can some please assess my Writing Task 2...!
Replies: 3
Views: 1296

Re: Can some please assess my Writing Task 2...!

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by lingxia
Tue Sep 29, 2015 12:14 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2
Replies: 3
Views: 2458

Re: Writing task 2

probably 6-6.5 ? I am not an expert on estimating score.... sorry
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by lingxia
Mon Sep 28, 2015 12:37 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: hello can someone judge my essay...thank you
Replies: 7
Views: 2326

Re: hello can someone judge my essay...thank you

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by lingxia
Sun Sep 27, 2015 1:17 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: plz rate the Essay asked in IELTS on 26th Sep 2015
Replies: 1
Views: 990

Re: plz rate the Essay asked in IELTS on 26th Sep 2015

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by lingxia
Sat Sep 26, 2015 2:25 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 formal exams VS continuous assessment please give me some advice. Thank you
Replies: 0
Views: 6997

Task 2 formal exams VS continuous assessment please give me some advice. Thank you

Only formal examinations, written or practical, can give a clear picture of a students’ true knowledge and ability at university level. Continuous assessment like course work and projects are poor measures of student ability. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Academic writing practice) It i...
by lingxia
Fri Sep 25, 2015 11:50 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: 12 Sep exam topic writing task 2 Academic module in Melbourne
Replies: 1
Views: 2346

Re: 12 Sep exam topic writing task 2 Academic module in Melbourne

the result is awful..... I feel terrible..... :oops:
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by lingxia
Thu Sep 24, 2015 6:56 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: SOMEONE PLEASE RATE MY IELTS WRITING TASK 2 PLEASE!!
Replies: 4
Views: 1612

Re: SOMEONE PLEASE RATE MY IELTS WRITING TASK 2 PLEASE!!

a very high level essay indeed.sorry i am incapable to mark essays in such level.
by lingxia
Wed Sep 23, 2015 12:39 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Exam on 26th Sep, need some tips.. PLEASE!!!
Replies: 5
Views: 3552

Re: Exam on 26th Sep, need some tips.. PLEASE!!!

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by lingxia
Wed Sep 23, 2015 12:22 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Exam on 26th Sep, need some tips.. PLEASE!!!
Replies: 5
Views: 3552

Re: Exam on 26th Sep, need some tips.. PLEASE!!!

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by lingxia
Tue Sep 22, 2015 2:40 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 medical topics Much appreciate for marking my essay
Replies: 2
Views: 4519

Task 2 medical topics Much appreciate for marking my essay

Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunize their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children? In contemporary society, it is not uncommon to see vaccines are wi...
by lingxia
Mon Sep 21, 2015 2:26 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: I have test on 19 september, please comment on my essay
Replies: 2
Views: 768

Re: I have test on 19 september, please comment on my essay

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I think it is probably a 5.5-6.0 level essay.
Problems identified
No.1 examples are too general and less convincing.
No.2 too much repetitions on the structure of sentences.
No.3 try to use linking words to improve cohesion

hope you pass your exam