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by Neel
Tue Jun 07, 2016 11:07 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Advantage and disadvantage essay
Replies: 1
Views: 579

Advantage and disadvantage essay

Dear all, I recently appeared for IELTS exam. I got task 2 essay on Advantages and disadvantages. I am confused for action words: it was asked like " What do you think this trend has more advantages or more disadvantages?" . So should i draw only advantages or only disadvantages or should ...
by Neel
Tue Dec 08, 2015 1:28 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: ELDERLY PEOPLE MOVING INTO RETIREMENT HOMES
Replies: 4
Views: 852

Some people say that giving a smaller amount of money weekly to children will help them become more capable as they grow

Hello, I am appearing for IELTS exam on 12th December. Please go through the essay and give valuable feedback with improvements needed. Nowadays, whether money should be given to children or not has sparked a heated debate. While some people believe that money should be given to children to learn ho...
by Neel
Tue Dec 08, 2015 1:13 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: ELDERLY PEOPLE MOVING INTO RETIREMENT HOMES
Replies: 4
Views: 852

Re: ELDERLY PEOPLE MOVING INTO RETIREMENT HOMES

Thanks so much Flick. My exam is scheduled on 12th December, hope I get 7 bands. Any suggestions for any improvements in writing?
by Neel
Tue Dec 01, 2015 5:41 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: ELDERLY PEOPLE MOVING INTO RETIREMENT HOMES
Replies: 4
Views: 852

Re: ELDERLY PEOPLE MOVING INTO RETIREMENT HOMES

Hello,, Please check my above written essay work and give your valuable feedback. I am short of 10 days before actual exam.
by Neel
Tue Dec 01, 2015 1:48 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: ELDERLY PEOPLE MOVING INTO RETIREMENT HOMES
Replies: 4
Views: 852

ELDERLY PEOPLE MOVING INTO RETIREMENT HOMES

In many societies, elderly people often live in retirement homes. This is not appropriate because families should always care for their aging members. Do you agree? With the advent of advanced technologies, social liberation and fast paced life, family structures have considerably changed in order ...