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by scottweiguo
Sat Dec 05, 2015 10:44 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 1 Line chart, share and need comments
Replies: 4
Views: 864

Re: Task 1 Line chart, share and need comments

Overall good vocabulary and writing style! The line chart provides information about the trend of domestic access to four modern technological devices: CD player, mobile phone, internet and home computer in the United Kingdom over seven years from 1996 to 2003. In general, the four devices technolo...
by scottweiguo
Fri Dec 04, 2015 12:45 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 1 Line chart, share and need comments
Replies: 4
Views: 864

Re: Task 1 Line chart, share and need comments

Hi Scott! Very good. You have covered all the main points and noted the main trends. Overall, good vocab and grammar too. 1. dramatic, not dramatical 2. more than tripled, not more than trippled increase All the best, David Thank you very much for your help David. But just regarding with the second...
by scottweiguo
Thu Nov 26, 2015 1:27 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 1 Line chart, share and need comments
Replies: 4
Views: 864

Task 1 Line chart, share and need comments

QQ图片20151127000634.jpg The line chart provides information about the trend of domestic access to four modern technological devices: CD player, mobile phone, internet and home computer in the United Kingdom over seven years from 1996 to 2003. In general, the four devices saw a upward trend of famile...