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Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement? ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Living in a world covered by technology ha s w...

Hello! The descriptions of each of the lines are reasonable, though more detail (figures) would be useful. The summary at the beginning is incorrect - pizza was not the least favourite over the entire period. Vocabulary and grammar are good. Mistakes do not interfere with meaning. All the best, Dav...

This line graph compares the popularity of three kind of fast food(pizza, fish and chips and hamburgers) among youth in Australia between the years 1975 to 2000. Overall, fish and chips was eaten more at the start of the period, while it was replaced by hamburgers after 1985. Interestingly, pizza wa...

Hello! You need to include more figures in your answer. As there are only 12 months, this is reasonable. Also make sure that the figures are correct - I think you have divided some figures by ten! Also be careful because not all countries have winter at the same time - UK and Australia. Grammar and...

This bar chart illustrates the percentage of people played different ports in New Zealand divided by gender in 2002. Overall, more boys participated in different sports in comparison to girls. The majority of girls used to play netball, while boy's favorite sport was soccer. Girls took part in two s...

Dear mkhitaryan
I think it is not a good idea to add your ideas and personal information in writing task 1 because this task is about writing a report about what you visually see. In writing task 2 it is okay if you are asked to write your opinion.
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mkhitaryan wrote:I am just a beginner in IELTS, but I think that you should make your sentences a little bit shorter. Sometimes it made me confused when I was reading the essay.

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This line graph illustrates the average amount of rainfall in some countries in 2004. The volume of precipitation is measured in millimeters. Overall, as can be seen, rainfall in these countries in the year 2004 was seasonal and they experienced more rainy days in fall and winter in comparison to sp...

Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement? ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Children unhealthy lifestyle Living in a world ...