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by pionml
Thu Apr 10, 2014 11:11 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Help me correct my essay "teleworking", thank all
Replies: 0
Views: 762

Help me correct my essay "teleworking", thank all

‘Teleworking’, or the use of telecommunications to allow people to work from home, should be adopted by all employers in order to improve the quality of life of their staff.
 To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Remote workplaces or working from home have been a popular tren...
by pionml
Tue Mar 11, 2014 2:25 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Help me correct my essay "perfect society", thank all
Replies: 2
Views: 2119

Re: Help me correct my essay "perfect society", thank all

Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society. However, there is still no agreement about what a perfect society would be like. What, in your opinion, would be the most important element of a perfect society? What can people do to help create an ideal society? After fixing: ...
by pionml
Mon Mar 10, 2014 10:07 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Help me correct my essay "perfect society", thank all
Replies: 2
Views: 2119

Help me correct my essay "perfect society", thank all

Throughout history, people have dreamed of living in a perfect society. However, there is still no agreement about what a perfect society would be like. What, in your opinion, would be the most important element of a perfect society? What can people do to help create an ideal society? Ideal society...
by pionml
Mon Mar 10, 2014 8:37 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Help me correct my essay "credit card", thank all
Replies: 3
Views: 2610

Re: Help me correct my essay "credit card"

Nowadays it is easy to apply for and be given a credit card. However, some people experience problems when they are not be able to pay their debts back. In your opinion, do the advantages of credit cards outweigh the disadvantages? Possessing[ Acquiring Try to align words with main topic for the sa...
by pionml
Mon Mar 10, 2014 4:17 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Help me correct my essay "credit card", thank all
Replies: 3
Views: 2610

Help me correct my essay "credit card", thank all

Nowadays it is easy to apply for and be given a credit card. However, some people experience problems when they are not be able to pay their debts back. In your opinion, do the advantages of credit cards outweigh the disadvantages? Possessing a credit card has been an inevitable thing in the modern ...