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:/ i am aiming for ( 7 ) but i guess i am not even close considering the mistakes u found, could u check my other posts ,please !!!!
what do i need to improve??

yes of course. this is the reason why i am posting here in the 1st place

Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion My response : People utilize language for self expression and communication. Every now a...

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. My response: It is argued whether to increase quantities of sport facilities , o...

Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays. Does this development have more disadvantages than advantages? MY response: Some supervisors wish to have the ability of contacting there employees at any time , even on holidays. In my opinion,this development hav...

a glance at the graph given reveals data about average amount of carbon dioxide that is emitted by one person in five countries: Italy, Sweden, UK and Portugal.the study was carried out between 1967 and 2007. it is evident that the amount of carbon dioxide the Portuguese person emitted was increasin...

my score is 5 out of 10 !!!!!!
u mean overall or just in grammar
i really couldn't interpretate ur message!
r u an examiner???

Q: Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology . Discuss both of these views and give your opinion my response : Ed...

its important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. punishment is necessary to learn them this distinction. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour...

Thanks for the reply and grammar feedback
most of criminals are homeless seeking money.
i meant to say that by leaving the murderer a life the society is committing a murder

please give me a mark out of 9 and a better feedback involving my spelling . task response and cohesion and coherence

task 2 question : "by punishing murderers with the death penalty,society is also guilty of committing a murder. Therefore,life in prison is a better punishment for murderers, " my response: Law is what differentiates human beings from other animals. execution is one of the measures used by...

The map illustrates Gartsdon town, which is inhabitant by 65,000 people. There is anew supermarket planed to be built on two possible areas shown in the illustration. At the center of the town lies the town center, which in it's south region is one of the possible areas to build the supermarket. The...

Part of the people thinks that competition should be promoted in children, whereas others think that teamwork, if enhanced, can become more beneficial to kids when they grow up. In my point of view, i think that both perspectives have pros and cons, but i prefer teaching children to co-operate. Chil...

The graphs illustrate the percentages of students of 5 age groups who are studying for career or for interest and the amount of support they receive. It can be clearly seen that most of the students studying for their careers are under 26 years old, while the most studying for interest are the ones ...

Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective. • comics • books • radio • television • film • theater Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge ...

The graphs show how education and science participated in developing and developed countries in 1980 and 1990. It can be clearly seen that industrialized countries have significantly higher levels than the developing ones. While the average years of schooling was above eight years, it became above 1...

Thank you David.I will try to work hard on the tidiness part.

The graph compares between the prices of housing, in a town, at both the ones on market and the sold ones in 2005. It can be clearly seen that the prices on market is much higher, though sold with lesser prices. On the market the prices were 335,000$ and 328,000$ for July and August respectively. Wh...

The graph shows how prices differ of advanced tools over time between 2004 and 2006 in Egypt in terms of US dollars. A glance at the chart, then it is noticed that the navigation system was at higher price than smart phones but at 2006 they became at a similar price. In 2004, the prices were steady ...

writng t1.1.PNG The graph reveals the percentage of growth on wages for somecountry from 1993 to 2003. IT can be clearly seen that the peak was in 1998 and the bottom was in 2002. In 1993 the growth rate was 2% in contrast with 1994, in which the rate raised to 4%, then falling back to 3% by 1995 a...

writng t1.1.PNG The graph reveals the percentage of growth on wages for somecountry from 1993 to 2003. IT can be clearly seen that the peak was in 1998 and the bottom was in 2002. In 1993 the growth rate was 2% in contrast with 1994, in which the rate raised to 4%, then falling back to 3% by 1995 a...

Thank you very much, David.
I will try my best to apply your advise in my next articles.

ELTS Writing Task 2/ IELTS Essay: You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into...

Hello, this is my response to the following task 2 question: It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss th...