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Many people are convinced that the talents such as, music and sport are features that some people were born with. On the other hand, it is argued that these talents can be taught to children to becobe good athletes or musicians. In this essay, I will discuss the both perspectives. To begin, it is ce...

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Nowadays, higher number of students decide to join universities every year. Among the wide range of subjects and faculties, some people think that we should allow students ti study only so-called useful subjects. However, other people argue that students should study whatever they like. Actually, ea...

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The distinction between right and wrong is a crucial thing to be learnt in an early age. I believe that there are many ways to teach our children the ethics and the manners, but punishment is necessary in some circumstances to avoid forgetting these manners. However, I think that there are ways of p...

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Unpaid community service is a very important aspect in any successful society. Its vital role encouraged a part of the society to believe that it should be an obligatory program at high schools . Actually, I partly agree on this opinion , but there are some reasons that may make that a wrong decisio...

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The four pie charts illustrate the differences between the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and what is expected to be in 2050.At a first glance,it is clear that the percentage of the youth between 15 to 59 years in Yemen is increasing.on the other hand , the rate of Italian old people is grow...