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by rairaichan0323
Thu Apr 24, 2014 12:11 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls grade it !!task 1- invite friend to travel with you
Replies: 3
Views: 1047

pls grade it !!task 1- invite friend to travel with you

You have a plan to go holiday. You would like to with your friend. Write a letter him explain why you need an holiday what is your holiday plan why you want your friend to go with you Dear Jenny, How are you doing? I hope you are well. I’m writing to invite you to travel to Perth with me. We have ju...
by rairaichan0323
Thu Apr 24, 2014 11:23 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: guys, today's test question
Replies: 14
Views: 3848

Re: guys, today's test question

thank you for ur sharing and gd luck for ur exam :)
by rairaichan0323
Thu Apr 24, 2014 2:14 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls give me a band score Task 2-rent accommodation
Replies: 3
Views: 2115

pls give me a band score Task 2-rent accommodation

Many people today rent accommodation rather than buy homes. Do advantages of this decision outweigh disadvantages? In the present day, it seems that more people tend to rent an accommodation instead of buying a house. It is agreed that the benefits of renting an apartment is far outweigh its drawbac...
by rairaichan0323
Thu Apr 24, 2014 2:12 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls grade my letter - somethin happen to you
Replies: 3
Views: 757

pls grade my letter - somethin happen to you

Write a letter to your friend/family to describe an accident that has happened to you and ask for help. Dear Jenny, How are you doing? I hope you are well. I am writing to ask for your assistance. I am staying at Mary Hospital as I had a car wreck two days ago. It is nothing serious just broken leg....
by rairaichan0323
Wed Apr 23, 2014 9:43 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: friend< house, pet>
Replies: 1
Views: 593

Re: friend< house, pet>

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties ---------------------------------------------...
by rairaichan0323
Wed Apr 23, 2014 9:33 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls grade my letter - asking for loan
Replies: 3
Views: 1089

pls grade my letter - asking for loan

As an international student in Sweden, you have an account with a local bank. The monthly bank transfer you receive from your parents has been delayed this month due to an error at your parents’ bank. Write a letter to your bank. In your letter: introduce yourself and ask for a loan, say why you nee...
by rairaichan0323
Wed Apr 23, 2014 6:19 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls check my letter ! thank you -friend helping
Replies: 2
Views: 730

pls check my letter ! thank you -friend helping

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties Dear Jenny, I am glad that you agree to assis...
by rairaichan0323
Wed Apr 23, 2014 3:09 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls give me a band score for Task 1-apply holiday
Replies: 2
Views: 670

pls give me a band score for Task 1-apply holiday

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask you manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter  Explain why you want to take time off  Give details of the amount of time you need  Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away ...
by rairaichan0323
Tue Apr 22, 2014 11:13 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls grade my TASK 2 essay - money
Replies: 5
Views: 1294

Re: pls grade my TASK 2 essay - money

thank you allen!! :D
by rairaichan0323
Tue Apr 22, 2014 9:53 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls grade my TASK 2 essay - money
Replies: 5
Views: 1294

Re: pls grade my TASK 2 essay - money

thank you! allen
i just wanna to know why you disagree with my word choice " cheerful, joyful" i just try to use another words instead of happy.

thank you!!
by rairaichan0323
Tue Apr 22, 2014 6:56 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls grade my TASK 2 essay - money
Replies: 5
Views: 1294

Re: pls grade my TASK 2 essay - money

is any one can help me? thank you :D
by rairaichan0323
Tue Apr 22, 2014 6:18 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls kindly grade my essay- Supermarket Vs local shop
Replies: 1
Views: 1938

pls kindly grade my essay- Supermarket Vs local shop

People prefer to go shopping in the supermarket rather than small shops and local markets. Why has this happened? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? In the fast-paced of life, urban citizens like to buy daily items in big supermarket chains rather than shopping in small stores an...
by rairaichan0323
Mon Apr 21, 2014 8:51 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls evaluate my essay!! pollution and waste
Replies: 2
Views: 815

pls evaluate my essay!! pollution and waste

More and more pollution and waste are created these days. What do these problems cause to people? What should we do to reduce the pollution? In this age of change, the human society is progressing rapidly on various fronts. Yet at the same time, two serious issues have arisen, which are contaminatio...
by rairaichan0323
Mon Apr 21, 2014 3:06 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls grade my TASK 2 essay - money
Replies: 5
Views: 1294

pls grade my TASK 2 essay - money

Money may make people happy. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In the modern society, money plays a key role in the society. Some people argue that cash can make individuals joyful. It is disagreed that being affluent people may not feel cheerful. This argument will be proven by looking at ho...
by rairaichan0323
Sat Apr 19, 2014 10:10 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls kindly check my letter ! friend - holiday
Replies: 1
Views: 1475

pls kindly check my letter ! friend - holiday

Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holidays. Write a letter your friends. In your letter - Thank them for the photos and for the holiday - Explain why you did not write earlier - Invite them to come and stay with you ...
by rairaichan0323
Sat Apr 19, 2014 8:55 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls give ur opinion of my essay! ( increase price of fuel)
Replies: 2
Views: 939

Re: pls give ur opinion of my essay! ( increase price of fue

thank you Durai ! really thank you for ur comments :D
by rairaichan0323
Sat Apr 19, 2014 8:54 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls grade my task 2 essay -rewarding
Replies: 1
Views: 1541

pls grade my task 2 essay -rewarding

Some people believe that children will have a promising future if they are always rewarded by their parents or teachers when they well-behave. However, other people argue that if the children misbehave, they should be punished so that they could be qualified citizens. Discuss both sides and give you...
by rairaichan0323
Fri Apr 18, 2014 7:51 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls kindly help me! thank you! task2-live event
Replies: 2
Views: 671

Re: pls kindly help me! thank you! task2-live event

thank Durai! u always give me a lot of gd comments. Could you please check this essay for me ? I confuse that my supporting points are correct or not? If it is incorrect, then I should write what the bad points of raising the fuel, isn't it? One more question. I often few that I have difficulties of...
by rairaichan0323
Fri Apr 18, 2014 5:59 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls give me a band score for Task 1- taxi service
Replies: 1
Views: 669

pls give me a band score for Task 1- taxi service

Write a letter to a manager of the taxi company to complain about the problem with the taxi service used by you. • When and where you used the taxi • Describe a problem you have faced • What do you expect the manager to do? Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the unprofes...
by rairaichan0323
Fri Apr 18, 2014 12:03 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls kindly help me! thank you! task2-live event
Replies: 2
Views: 671

pls kindly help me! thank you! task2-live event

Some people prefer to see live events (such as music and sports), but others think it is better to watch the events on television. Discuss both of the view and give your opinion. In the present age, it seems that more people enjoy attending events. Some people would like to see live events while man...
by rairaichan0323
Thu Apr 17, 2014 2:48 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: I rewrite this language essay, please kindly assess it.
Replies: 6
Views: 2296

Re: I rewrite this language essay, please kindly assess it.

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? I have a question about that if i support that the advantages of learning a foreign lanuage at primary outwei...
by rairaichan0323
Thu Apr 17, 2014 1:16 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls kindly check my letter ! complain - noise
Replies: 2
Views: 677

pls kindly check my letter ! complain - noise

Write a letter to your landlord as the neighbor above you makes a lot of noise. -Explain the problem -What have you done to resolve the issue? -What do you want this to do? Dear Mr. Wood, I am your tenant – Janis Lam and I am living at Room 202, 32 Mill Point Street. I am writing to express my dissa...
by rairaichan0323
Wed Apr 16, 2014 11:58 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls give me advice!! task 2 juvenile delinquency
Replies: 4
Views: 2646

Re: pls give me advice!! task 2 juvenile delinquency

thank you Durai and katseins

could u help me to check this easy. i have a doubt of my supporting pionts. thank you for ur helping.

this is the link

http://www.ieltsnetwork.com/viewtopic.p ... 3671#p3671