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by rairaichan0323
Thu Apr 03, 2014 7:53 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls mark my letter! thank you ( task 1)
Replies: 3
Views: 810

Re: pls mark my letter! thank you ( task 1)

thank you Durai! ur comment means a lot to me :D
by rairaichan0323
Thu Apr 03, 2014 5:46 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls help task 1 complain letter
Replies: 2
Views: 940

pls help task 1 complain letter

You had a meal at a restaurant. You are not happy with the service. Write to the manager to complain about it. Give details about the problems and request some compensation or refund. Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to bring to your attention the unprofessional service of one of the members of your sta...
by rairaichan0323
Thu Apr 03, 2014 4:55 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls mark my letter! thank you ( task 1)
Replies: 3
Views: 810

pls mark my letter! thank you ( task 1)

You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: introduce yourself, explain what sort of job you would like, and say what experience and skills you have. Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to seek for a part-time job. I came from Japan and at presen...
by rairaichan0323
Wed Apr 02, 2014 8:45 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls evaluate my essay!! thank you (Task2)
Replies: 3
Views: 983

Re: pls evaluate my essay!! thank you (Task2)

thank you! i just want to ask how i can make a good example. i often have a problem of making example. if i write down like as this, then is it better? " For example, children can learn more vocabulary by reading books " and also for the last sentence of first paragraph, i want to link thi...
by rairaichan0323
Wed Apr 02, 2014 3:45 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls evaluate my essay!! thank you (Task2)
Replies: 3
Views: 983

pls evaluate my essay!! thank you (Task2)

Some parents believe that it is good for children spend time on watching TV and computer games; but other parents believe that they should spend time on doing something else such as reading books. Agree or disagree with above statement. In the present age, children have many different ways to spend ...
by rairaichan0323
Wed Apr 02, 2014 12:37 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls grade me and give band score. thanks
Replies: 4
Views: 1159

Re: pls grade me and give band score. thanks

thank you Durai! that means the media is not pointing to newspaper, magazine etc. it means people or environment?? could you please grade my essay too! thank you!! " Customers are faced with increasing amounts of advertising due to the competition among companies. To what extent do you think co...
by rairaichan0323
Tue Apr 01, 2014 10:23 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: how to answer it? Ryan could you please help
Replies: 2
Views: 1095

how to answer it? Ryan could you please help

" Customers are faced with increasing amounts of advertising due to the competition among companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? And what measures can be taken to protect their interests? " Do i need to write one paragraph for how the consumers a...
by rairaichan0323
Tue Apr 01, 2014 8:48 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls grade me and give band score. thanks
Replies: 4
Views: 1159

Re: pls grade me and give band score. thanks

hi allzen_zhang
do u have any idea for writing this essay? i cannot think any points to write :(

" Today, there are more images of disasters and violence in the media. what are the casuses and waht are your solutions?


thank you
by rairaichan0323
Tue Apr 01, 2014 4:19 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls grade me and give band score. thanks
Replies: 4
Views: 1159

pls grade me and give band score. thanks

Do the negative effects of watching TV outweigh the positive effects? In the present age, watching TV is an indispensable part of our lives. But at the same time, controversy has arisen whether the negative effects of watching TV outweigh the positive effects. While there are certainly valid argumen...
by rairaichan0323
Mon Mar 31, 2014 11:09 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls help thanks!
Replies: 6
Views: 951

Re: pls help thanks!

thank you!! but my problem is always dont have idea for giving a good example . can you share ur experience how u can give a gd example for supporting the topic. thank you very much!!
by rairaichan0323
Mon Mar 31, 2014 8:26 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls help thanks!
Replies: 6
Views: 951

Re: pls help thanks!

thank you Durai!! may i ask you that how i can give a gd example for supporting my point. i found out that i have a problem to make a example. thank you
by rairaichan0323
Mon Mar 31, 2014 8:24 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls evaluate my essay!! thank you
Replies: 0
Views: 464

pls evaluate my essay!! thank you

Some people say that children should be made to obey rules while other people think children who are controlled too much will not be well-prepared for their adult life. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. It is generally recognized that obeying the laws is the basic responsibility of all t...
by rairaichan0323
Mon Mar 31, 2014 5:51 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls give me a band score for Task 1
Replies: 4
Views: 2110

Re: pls give me a band score for Task 1

thank you ur comment andytruong1202 !! :D
by rairaichan0323
Mon Mar 31, 2014 5:43 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls help!!
Replies: 1
Views: 558

pls help!!

Some people think students should go to private secondary schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In the present age, schooling is playing a pivotal role in individual success. Some people argue that students should attend private secondary schools. While there are certainly valid argument...
by rairaichan0323
Sat Mar 29, 2014 8:22 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls give me a band score for Task 1
Replies: 4
Views: 2110

pls give me a band score for Task 1

There is a swimming pool proposed to be built in your town. Write to the city council and say - Why is this swimming pool important to you? - Suggest where it should be built. - Why is it a good idea to have a swimming pool in the town and not outside of town? Dear Sir/Madam, I am delighted to learn...
by rairaichan0323
Fri Mar 28, 2014 6:37 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls help thanks!
Replies: 6
Views: 951

pls help thanks!

Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Some others say that advertisement tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which view point do you agree? Advertising has become an indispensable part of our lives. Some people argue that advertisement...
by rairaichan0323
Thu Mar 27, 2014 7:03 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls help me! thank you!
Replies: 1
Views: 554

pls help me! thank you!

You are planning to stay with a friend in an English speaking country. You are writing to your friend to find out some additional information. In your letter ask the following questions;  How long should you plan to stay for  What you should bring with you  What you would like to do there  There...
by rairaichan0323
Thu Mar 27, 2014 2:40 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls help and band it too! thank you
Replies: 2
Views: 873

pls help and band it too! thank you

Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and given you own opinion. There are widely differing views on the issue of whether it is better to teac...
by rairaichan0323
Thu Mar 27, 2014 12:43 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: how to answer this question
Replies: 2
Views: 1201

Re: how to answer this question

thank you very much Ryan :D
by rairaichan0323
Wed Mar 26, 2014 4:56 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls check my letter ! thank you
Replies: 3
Views: 827

pls check my letter ! thank you

You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter - Describe the problem with the equipment - Explain what happen when you phoned the shop - Say what you would like the manage...
by rairaichan0323
Wed Mar 26, 2014 2:19 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls help and give me a band score! thank you
Replies: 10
Views: 2465

pls help and give me a band score! thank you

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and giver your own opinion. In the present age, teaching children to be good members of society is playing a pivotal role ...
by rairaichan0323
Sat Mar 22, 2014 11:23 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: how to answer this question
Replies: 2
Views: 1201

how to answer this question

Some employers think formal academic qualifications are more important than life experience and personal qualities when looking for an employee. what are the causes of this phenomenon and do you think this is a positive development? The first part of question it looks like discussion essay, but the...