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by rairaichan0323
Sat Mar 22, 2014 11:16 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls grade it and band score ! thank you!!
Replies: 0
Views: 458

pls grade it and band score ! thank you!!

Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss. These days, it seems that famous sports professionals can have considerable income. But at the same time, ...
by rairaichan0323
Fri Mar 21, 2014 11:12 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: plse give me comment :) task 2
Replies: 0
Views: 428

plse give me comment :) task 2

There is not enough respect for the elderly people. What are the causes and what problems does this phenomenon create? This age of change, the human society is progressing rapidly on various fronts. Yet at the same time, there are many problems have arisen a serious one of which is lack respect for ...
by rairaichan0323
Fri Mar 21, 2014 4:02 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls help Task 2
Replies: 1
Views: 563

pls help Task 2

People think that living in the big cities is not healthy. Agree or Disagree? The past 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in the pace of life. It seems that people in big cities live a more stressful life than people in rural areas. But at the same time, controversy has arisen whether living in...
by rairaichan0323
Fri Mar 21, 2014 1:06 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: how can i answer this question
Replies: 2
Views: 1358

Re: how can i answer this question

thank you durai :D
by rairaichan0323
Thu Mar 20, 2014 6:45 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls give some comment!! task 2 save for future
Replies: 2
Views: 1090

pls give some comment!! task 2 save for future

Some people think they should save for their future life in order to live after retiring. To what extent do you agrees? In the present age, saving money is essential for supporting our later lives. But at the same time, controversy has arisen whether we should save for our future lives. Some people ...
by rairaichan0323
Thu Mar 20, 2014 12:37 am
Forum: IELTS related discussion
Topic: how can i answer this question
Replies: 2
Views: 1358

how can i answer this question

People today can perform the everyday tasks such as shopping, banking or even business transactions, without meeting others face-to-fac/ what effects will this phunomenon have on individuals and society as a whole? how i can answer this question? arguement? dicussion or report? there are many probl...
by rairaichan0323
Thu Mar 20, 2014 12:11 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls grade my TASK 2 essay!!
Replies: 4
Views: 2239

Re: pls grade my TASK 2 essay!!

thank you tuonglau! your comment is very helpful!! thanks a lot!!
by rairaichan0323
Wed Mar 19, 2014 8:54 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls mark my essay! thank you ( task 1)
Replies: 1
Views: 1096

pls mark my essay! thank you ( task 1)

Your friend asked you to teach his son English. You need to borrow some English books from a teacher. Write a letter to the teacher requesting these materials. In your letter you should share: -Details about the child. -What type of books you need -When and where you are going to teach this child De...
by rairaichan0323
Wed Mar 19, 2014 7:20 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls mark my essay! thank you
Replies: 2
Views: 1656

Re: pls mark my essay! thank you

thank you for allen_zhang !! if i change my example, is it better? thank you!! First of all, all the citizens have the right to determine how many children they want to have. For example, a democratic and progressive nation would allow and respect their residents' decision as well as it should not d...
by rairaichan0323
Wed Mar 19, 2014 6:16 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls mark my essay! thank you
Replies: 2
Views: 1656

pls mark my essay! thank you

Some governments say how many children a family can hare in their country. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. It is sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer. The past 5...
by rairaichan0323
Wed Mar 19, 2014 5:15 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls grade my TASK 2 essay!!
Replies: 4
Views: 2239

Re: pls grade my TASK 2 essay!!

why? may i ask you what is the problem of it?
by rairaichan0323
Wed Mar 19, 2014 2:20 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls grade my TASK 2 essay!!
Replies: 4
Views: 2239

pls grade my TASK 2 essay!!

Some people argue that teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them. Others believe that intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment. Discuss both views and how do you think about it? It is generally recognized that each child has different ...
by rairaichan0323
Tue Mar 18, 2014 2:00 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: plse help me ( task 2)
Replies: 0
Views: 459

plse help me ( task 2)

Some people think food has been changed by technological and scientific advances and this is an improvement while others worry that is harmful. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. In the present age, our food has been transformed by technological and scientific advances. But at the same time, ...
by rairaichan0323
Mon Mar 17, 2014 11:59 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Ielts general Task 2
Replies: 3
Views: 2068

Re: Ielts general Task 2

would u plse give me comment on my another essay! thank you very much!

http://www.ieltsnetwork.com/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=802
by rairaichan0323
Mon Mar 17, 2014 11:58 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please kindly grade my essay ( general TASK 1)
Replies: 5
Views: 1494

Re: please kindly grade my essay ( general TASK 1)

thank you SyntaxFox! i will keep practising :)
by rairaichan0323
Mon Mar 17, 2014 11:36 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Ielts general Task 2
Replies: 3
Views: 2068

Re: Ielts general Task 2

thank you for advise!!
by rairaichan0323
Mon Mar 17, 2014 11:17 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please grade my essay !! thanks a lot
Replies: 2
Views: 1040

please grade my essay !! thanks a lot

Money help us bring happiness but some people think that extra money creates problems also. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons and examples from your knowledge and experience It is generally recognized that money assists us to discover happiness. Throughout history, modern humanity frequently d...
by rairaichan0323
Mon Mar 17, 2014 2:16 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please grade my letter. thank you ( general task 1)
Replies: 1
Views: 1079

please grade my letter. thank you ( general task 1)

Write a letter to a friend in a foreign country who has invited you to their wedding and say: - Why can’t you attend the wedding? - Tell them about the gift you are sending. - Suggest how you can meet after the wedding. Dear Jenny, I am glad to hear that you are getting married next Sunday and thank...
by rairaichan0323
Sun Mar 16, 2014 2:36 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please kindly grade my essay ( general TASK 1)
Replies: 5
Views: 1494

please kindly grade my essay ( general TASK 1)

You have recently bought a toy over the internet. When it was delivered you have found some problems with it. Write a letter to the toy company manager and say - Give details of the purchase. - Describe the problem. - What do you expect the company to do about it? Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in ord...
by rairaichan0323
Fri Mar 14, 2014 11:08 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Ielts general Task 2
Replies: 3
Views: 2068

Ielts general Task 2

Traffic and housing problems in major cities would be solved by moving big companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree? The past 50 years have seen a considerable increase in traffic and housing issues. But at the meantime, controversy has arisen whether big...