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by rairaichan0323
Wed May 07, 2014 2:42 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls kindly check my letter ! complain - noise
Replies: 2
Views: 677

Re: pls kindly check my letter ! complain - noise

thank you Flick!!

can you help me to check my essay too. thank you!!

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by rairaichan0323
Tue May 06, 2014 2:51 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls give me suggestiono-task 2-rubbish
Replies: 1
Views: 569

pls give me suggestiono-task 2-rubbish

In this age of change, the human society is progressing rapidly on various fronts. Yet, at the same time, many problems have arisen, a serious one of matters is a vast amount of trash. This issue has drawn widespread attention. It is argued that among the chief causes of this, are one-off packaging ...
by rairaichan0323
Mon May 05, 2014 7:46 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls grade it!! task2- children grow up in country or city
Replies: 1
Views: 833

pls grade it!! task2- children grow up in country or city

It is better for children to grow up in the countryside instead of cities. Do you agree or disagree? In the present age, it seems that more children tend to relocate to city study or work. While some people opine that it is better for children to bring up in the country rather than urban cities, man...
by rairaichan0323
Mon May 05, 2014 5:46 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls check my letter ! task1- request time off
Replies: 2
Views: 1600

Re: pls check my letter ! task1- request time off

thank you Durai. i agreed with your comment :)
by rairaichan0323
Mon May 05, 2014 5:41 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls give me a band score-task 1-apology in advance
Replies: 4
Views: 1909

pls give me a band score-task 1-apology in advance

You are having a graduation party next Saturday night. You have invited 50 people to celebrate at an outdoor barbecue evening, which may continue into late into the night. Write a letter to your elderly neighbour. In your letter: • explain what will be happening • offer your apologies in advance • i...
by rairaichan0323
Sun May 04, 2014 9:13 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please grade my essay-task 2- government duty
Replies: 1
Views: 1680

please grade my essay-task 2- government duty

120630 It is the government’s responsibility to look after people with problems, such as the unemployed and the homeless. Do you agree or disagree? In this age of change, the human society is progressing rapidly on various fronts. Yet at the same time, many serious problems have arisen such as unemp...
by rairaichan0323
Sun May 04, 2014 8:40 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: ple grade it for me-task1- gym
Replies: 0
Views: 2070

ple grade it for me-task1- gym

You exercise regularly and have been a member of many different gyms. Recently, you moved into a new neighborhood and joined a new gym. You have noticed that people at this gym do not bother to wipe down the machines after use and often leave dirty towels on the benches in the change rooms. Write to...
by rairaichan0323
Sun May 04, 2014 8:16 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls check my letter ! task1- request time off
Replies: 2
Views: 1600

pls check my letter ! task1- request time off

You are studying overseas. You need to return to your country before the end of the semester for a family event. Write a letter to your supervisor. In your letter: • Request time off • Explain why you need to leave early • Reassure him / her that your studies will not suffer Dear Mr. Wood, My name i...
by rairaichan0323
Sun May 04, 2014 5:29 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls check it- task 2-advantages and disadvantge of tourism
Replies: 2
Views: 1532

Re: pls check it- task 2-advantages and disadvantge of touri

thank you Durai,

you are right, i often use similar structure to write my essays. this is because i think that i can help me to finish the essays within 40 minutes. i worried i do not have enough time to do it. bascially, my written template is following Ryan's one. thank you for your suggestion :)
by rairaichan0323
Sat May 03, 2014 1:41 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls help-task 2 criminal
Replies: 2
Views: 597

Re: pls help-task 2 criminal

I also not really understand it. So i just guessing. I got this question from one chinese website. I think it may something wrong of it.
Anyway thank you durai
by rairaichan0323
Sat May 03, 2014 11:36 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: do you have any ideas to answer this question?
Replies: 5
Views: 981

Re: do you have any ideas to answer this question?

thank you Durai and allen :)

i check this question on the internet. i just feel that question is unclear; therefore, i have no idea how to answer it :shock:
by rairaichan0323
Sat May 03, 2014 11:32 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls help-task 2 criminal
Replies: 2
Views: 597

pls help-task 2 criminal

Facing people who commit crimes after setting free from prison, people always have much complain about it. What are the reasons for this problem? What measures should be taken to deal with this? In the modern society, law-breakers have to capture in the prison when they committed crimes. After they ...
by rairaichan0323
Sat May 03, 2014 10:40 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: do you have any ideas to answer this question?
Replies: 5
Views: 981

Re: do you have any ideas to answer this question?

thank you for ur suggestion.

i have one more question , if they are asking the reasons for something and asking you provide solutions to it. do i need to give more than one reasons and solutions? or i can only provide one reason and solution?

thank you Durai
by rairaichan0323
Sat May 03, 2014 9:34 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls check it- task 2-advantages and disadvantge of tourism
Replies: 2
Views: 1532

pls check it- task 2-advantages and disadvantge of tourism

International tourism has many effects on the local residents. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the development? In the present age, it seems that there is a considerable increase in global tourism. Yet at the same time, the local dwellers have been affected by the international tourism....
by rairaichan0323
Fri May 02, 2014 10:42 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls kindly help-task 2- supporting local film industry
Replies: 3
Views: 955

pls kindly help-task 2- supporting local film industry

People always like foreign films better than the local films, so the government should invest some money in supporting the local movie industry. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In the present age, it seems that more people love foreign movies rather than local movies. Some people argue that...
by rairaichan0323
Fri May 02, 2014 9:34 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: do you have any ideas to answer this question?
Replies: 5
Views: 981

do you have any ideas to answer this question?

hi guys, do you have any ideas to answer this question? It is common for leading media like newspaper and TV programs to report the violence and other crimes in society. What are the reasons for this event? What measures should we take to deal with this problem? are they asking the reason why media ...
by rairaichan0323
Fri May 02, 2014 7:31 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls kindly check it- task 2-adverts only for entertaining
Replies: 0
Views: 439

pls kindly check it- task 2-adverts only for entertaining

People are willing to buy some goods in order to fulfill their real need, but not because of the promotion of advertising, so the advertisements are only for entertaining. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In the contemporary society, advertisements are an indispensable part of each individua...
by rairaichan0323
Fri May 02, 2014 5:40 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: need your helping - task 2 focus on study
Replies: 0
Views: 437

need your helping - task 2 focus on study

In university, students should focus on their full-time study as obligation. However, others believe that they should take part in the social practices as many as possible. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. In the present age, university students will frequently do some part-time job in ...
by rairaichan0323
Thu May 01, 2014 6:07 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls grade it - task 2-studying history
Replies: 1
Views: 680

pls grade it - task 2-studying history

It is a must for students to learn history at school, and it is a waste of learning other less important subjects for kids. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Nowadays, most of the students have to learn various curricula at school and their time is fully occupied by it. Some people argue that...
by rairaichan0323
Thu May 01, 2014 2:50 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls grade it - task 2-young or old are more valued
Replies: 0
Views: 417

pls grade it - task 2-young or old are more valued

In some cultures, the young are more valued, but in other places, the old are more valued. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. In the contemporary society, there are widely differing views on the value of youngsters and senior citizens. While in some places argue that youths are more value...
by rairaichan0323
Thu May 01, 2014 1:39 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: task 1 - suggestion- mall facilities
Replies: 1
Views: 3255

Re: task 1 - suggestion- mall facilities

can someone check this letter for me? thank you!!