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can you help me to check my essay too. thank you!!
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- Wed May 07, 2014 2:42 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls kindly check my letter ! complain - noise
- Replies: 2
- Views: 677
- Tue May 06, 2014 9:10 am
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- Topic: pls give me a band score-task 1-apology in advance
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1909
Re: pls give me a band score-task 1-apology in advance
Thank you for you helping
- Tue May 06, 2014 2:51 am
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- Topic: pls give me suggestiono-task 2-rubbish
- Replies: 1
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pls give me suggestiono-task 2-rubbish
In this age of change, the human society is progressing rapidly on various fronts. Yet, at the same time, many problems have arisen, a serious one of matters is a vast amount of trash. This issue has drawn widespread attention. It is argued that among the chief causes of this, are one-off packaging ...
- Mon May 05, 2014 7:46 am
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- Topic: pls grade it!! task2- children grow up in country or city
- Replies: 1
- Views: 833
pls grade it!! task2- children grow up in country or city
It is better for children to grow up in the countryside instead of cities. Do you agree or disagree? In the present age, it seems that more children tend to relocate to city study or work. While some people opine that it is better for children to bring up in the country rather than urban cities, man...
- Mon May 05, 2014 5:46 am
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- Topic: pls check my letter ! task1- request time off
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1600
Re: pls check my letter ! task1- request time off
thank you Durai. i agreed with your comment
- Mon May 05, 2014 5:41 am
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- Topic: pls give me a band score-task 1-apology in advance
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1909
pls give me a band score-task 1-apology in advance
You are having a graduation party next Saturday night. You have invited 50 people to celebrate at an outdoor barbecue evening, which may continue into late into the night. Write a letter to your elderly neighbour. In your letter: • explain what will be happening • offer your apologies in advance • i...
- Sun May 04, 2014 9:13 am
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- Topic: please grade my essay-task 2- government duty
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1680
please grade my essay-task 2- government duty
120630 It is the government’s responsibility to look after people with problems, such as the unemployed and the homeless. Do you agree or disagree? In this age of change, the human society is progressing rapidly on various fronts. Yet at the same time, many serious problems have arisen such as unemp...
- Sun May 04, 2014 8:40 am
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- Topic: ple grade it for me-task1- gym
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ple grade it for me-task1- gym
You exercise regularly and have been a member of many different gyms. Recently, you moved into a new neighborhood and joined a new gym. You have noticed that people at this gym do not bother to wipe down the machines after use and often leave dirty towels on the benches in the change rooms. Write to...
- Sun May 04, 2014 8:16 am
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- Topic: pls check my letter ! task1- request time off
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1600
pls check my letter ! task1- request time off
You are studying overseas. You need to return to your country before the end of the semester for a family event. Write a letter to your supervisor. In your letter: • Request time off • Explain why you need to leave early • Reassure him / her that your studies will not suffer Dear Mr. Wood, My name i...
- Sun May 04, 2014 5:29 am
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- Topic: pls check it- task 2-advantages and disadvantge of tourism
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1532
Re: pls check it- task 2-advantages and disadvantge of touri
thank you Durai,
you are right, i often use similar structure to write my essays. this is because i think that i can help me to finish the essays within 40 minutes. i worried i do not have enough time to do it. bascially, my written template is following Ryan's one. thank you for your suggestion
you are right, i often use similar structure to write my essays. this is because i think that i can help me to finish the essays within 40 minutes. i worried i do not have enough time to do it. bascially, my written template is following Ryan's one. thank you for your suggestion
- Sat May 03, 2014 1:41 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls help-task 2 criminal
- Replies: 2
- Views: 597
Re: pls help-task 2 criminal
I also not really understand it. So i just guessing. I got this question from one chinese website. I think it may something wrong of it.
Anyway thank you durai
Anyway thank you durai
- Sat May 03, 2014 11:36 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: do you have any ideas to answer this question?
- Replies: 5
- Views: 981
Re: do you have any ideas to answer this question?
thank you Durai and allen
i check this question on the internet. i just feel that question is unclear; therefore, i have no idea how to answer it
i check this question on the internet. i just feel that question is unclear; therefore, i have no idea how to answer it
- Sat May 03, 2014 11:32 am
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- Topic: pls help-task 2 criminal
- Replies: 2
- Views: 597
pls help-task 2 criminal
Facing people who commit crimes after setting free from prison, people always have much complain about it. What are the reasons for this problem? What measures should be taken to deal with this? In the modern society, law-breakers have to capture in the prison when they committed crimes. After they ...
- Sat May 03, 2014 10:40 am
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- Topic: do you have any ideas to answer this question?
- Replies: 5
- Views: 981
Re: do you have any ideas to answer this question?
thank you for ur suggestion.
i have one more question , if they are asking the reasons for something and asking you provide solutions to it. do i need to give more than one reasons and solutions? or i can only provide one reason and solution?
thank you Durai
i have one more question , if they are asking the reasons for something and asking you provide solutions to it. do i need to give more than one reasons and solutions? or i can only provide one reason and solution?
thank you Durai
- Sat May 03, 2014 10:20 am
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- Topic: pls kindly help-task 2- supporting local film industry
- Replies: 3
- Views: 955
Re: pls kindly help-task 2- supporting local film industry
thank you your comment
- Sat May 03, 2014 9:36 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls kindly help-task 2- supporting local film industry
- Replies: 3
- Views: 955
Re: pls kindly help-task 2- supporting local film industry
thank you your comment
- Sat May 03, 2014 9:34 am
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- Topic: pls check it- task 2-advantages and disadvantge of tourism
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1532
pls check it- task 2-advantages and disadvantge of tourism
International tourism has many effects on the local residents. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the development? In the present age, it seems that there is a considerable increase in global tourism. Yet at the same time, the local dwellers have been affected by the international tourism....
- Fri May 02, 2014 10:42 am
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- Topic: pls kindly help-task 2- supporting local film industry
- Replies: 3
- Views: 955
pls kindly help-task 2- supporting local film industry
People always like foreign films better than the local films, so the government should invest some money in supporting the local movie industry. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In the present age, it seems that more people love foreign movies rather than local movies. Some people argue that...
- Fri May 02, 2014 9:34 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: do you have any ideas to answer this question?
- Replies: 5
- Views: 981
do you have any ideas to answer this question?
hi guys, do you have any ideas to answer this question? It is common for leading media like newspaper and TV programs to report the violence and other crimes in society. What are the reasons for this event? What measures should we take to deal with this problem? are they asking the reason why media ...
- Fri May 02, 2014 7:31 am
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- Topic: pls kindly check it- task 2-adverts only for entertaining
- Replies: 0
- Views: 439
pls kindly check it- task 2-adverts only for entertaining
People are willing to buy some goods in order to fulfill their real need, but not because of the promotion of advertising, so the advertisements are only for entertaining. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In the contemporary society, advertisements are an indispensable part of each individua...
- Fri May 02, 2014 5:40 am
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- Topic: need your helping - task 2 focus on study
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- Views: 437
need your helping - task 2 focus on study
In university, students should focus on their full-time study as obligation. However, others believe that they should take part in the social practices as many as possible. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. In the present age, university students will frequently do some part-time job in ...
- Thu May 01, 2014 6:07 am
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- Topic: pls grade it - task 2-studying history
- Replies: 1
- Views: 680
pls grade it - task 2-studying history
It is a must for students to learn history at school, and it is a waste of learning other less important subjects for kids. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Nowadays, most of the students have to learn various curricula at school and their time is fully occupied by it. Some people argue that...
- Thu May 01, 2014 2:50 am
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- Topic: pls grade it - task 2-young or old are more valued
- Replies: 0
- Views: 417
pls grade it - task 2-young or old are more valued
In some cultures, the young are more valued, but in other places, the old are more valued. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. In the contemporary society, there are widely differing views on the value of youngsters and senior citizens. While in some places argue that youths are more value...
- Thu May 01, 2014 1:45 am
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- Topic: pls evaluate my essay!! pollution and waste
- Replies: 2
- Views: 815
Re: pls evaluate my essay!! pollution and waste
thank you Flick!!
- Thu May 01, 2014 1:39 am
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- Topic: task 1 - suggestion- mall facilities
- Replies: 1
- Views: 3255
Re: task 1 - suggestion- mall facilities
can someone check this letter for me? thank you!!