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- Thu May 01, 2014 1:29 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls check my task 2 essay - demolish old buildings
- Replies: 0
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pls check my task 2 essay - demolish old buildings
In some big cities, people plan to knock down old buildings in order to make space for new development. Is it a positive or a negative trend? In this age of change, the human society is progressing rapidly on various fronts. In many modern societies, people tend to tear down old buildings for new de...
- Wed Apr 30, 2014 11:42 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Help with adv/disadv questions?
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1176
Re: Help with adv/disadv questions?
i am confusing about the Q2 Q2. In some countries people pay different rates of tax depending on their salary, in other countries everyone pays the same rate. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? if i write it as a argument essay and agree it should be a good idea for the people paying tax ...
- Wed Apr 30, 2014 10:17 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls give me a band score Task 2-rent accommodation
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2115
Re: pls give me a band score Task 2-rent accommodation
thank you Flick!!! ![Very Happy :D](./images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif)
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- Wed Apr 30, 2014 8:55 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: task 1 - suggestion- mall facilities
- Replies: 1
- Views: 3255
task 1 - suggestion- mall facilities
You normally go shopping in the area where you live. However, you think some of the facilities for shoppers could be improved. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter: • say in general what you like about shopping in your area • say what is wrong with the facilities • suggest how they...
- Wed Apr 30, 2014 6:50 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls grade my letter !!task 1 - missing bag
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1952
Re: pls grade my letter !!task 1 - missing bag
thank you Flick, could you estimate my score too?
also could you please check this letter for me too.
http://www.ieltsnetwork.com/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=1410
thank you!!
also could you please check this letter for me too.
http://www.ieltsnetwork.com/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=1410
thank you!!
- Wed Apr 30, 2014 5:39 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls give me a band score for Task 1 - suggestion- cafeteria
- Replies: 2
- Views: 681
Re: pls give me a band score for Task 1 - suggestion- cafete
thank you Flick! could you give me band score too? thank you
- Wed Apr 30, 2014 5:38 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls give me a band score for Task 2-resist making changes
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2813
Re: pls give me a band score for Task 2-resist making change
thank you Durai for your advice ![Very Happy :D](./images/smilies/icon_e_biggrin.gif)
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- Wed Apr 30, 2014 5:37 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls grade my letter !!task 1 - missing bag
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1952
pls grade my letter !!task 1 - missing bag
Last Tuesday you flew from New York to Paris. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your cabin bag on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: • where and when you lost your bag • what your bag looks like • what its contents were Dear Sir/Madam,...
- Wed Apr 30, 2014 5:08 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: task 1 - complain- missing bank card
- Replies: 1
- Views: 4584
task 1 - complain- missing bank card
You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter • explain why you are writing • express concern about the missing card • ask them what they inten...
- Tue Apr 29, 2014 10:06 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls give me a band score for Task 2-resist making changes
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2813
Re: pls give me a band score for Task 2-resist making change
thank you Durai, so if it has 2 problems and 2 solutions of it. so should i write one paragraph for 2 problems and write another parargraph for 2 solutions ? OR one paragraph for problem 1 and solution 1 and write second paragrap for problem 2 and solution 2? which way is it better? thank you!!
- Tue Apr 29, 2014 7:51 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls give me a band score for Task 2-resist making changes
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2813
Re: pls give me a band score for Task 2-resist making change
hi Durai, i try to say the problems that they will have such as "they are becoming less competitive (problem 1 )and creating alienation between each other"( problem 2). according to these problems and then i provide some solutions to them. do i have mistake?? one more question. i have to w...
- Tue Apr 29, 2014 6:06 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls give me a band score for Task 1 - suggestion- cafeteria
- Replies: 2
- Views: 681
pls give me a band score for Task 1 - suggestion- cafeteria
You eat at your college cafeteria every lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter: • explain what you like bout the cafeteria • say what is wrong • suggest how it could be improved Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Janis and I am one of...
- Tue Apr 29, 2014 6:04 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls evaluate my essay!! Task 2 - advertising
- Replies: 4
- Views: 965
Re: pls evaluate my essay!! Task 2 - advertising
thank you Durai, i have learnt a lot from you!! ![Laughing :lol:](./images/smilies/icon_lol.gif)
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- Tue Apr 29, 2014 4:12 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls give me a band score for Task 1 -voluntary work
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2407
Re: pls give me a band score for Task 1 -voluntary work
thank you allen ![Smile :)](./images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif)
if i write down like this, is it better?
also are in needs of support from someone.
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if i write down like this, is it better?
also are in needs of support from someone.
- Tue Apr 29, 2014 3:47 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: task 1 - applying a job
- Replies: 1
- Views: 3774
task 1 - applying a job
You have decided to apply for a job as a Spanish instructor that was advertised in the April edition of the magazine Teaching Professional. This ad was posted by Mr John Sullivan, director of the Spanish department at The Language Institute of Great Britain in London, England. In your letter to Mr S...
- Tue Apr 29, 2014 3:15 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls give me a band score for Task 1 -voluntary work
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2407
pls give me a band score for Task 1 -voluntary work
You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: • Explain why you want to do the voluntary work. • State what your skills and experienc...
- Tue Apr 29, 2014 2:17 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls evaluate my essay!! Task 2 - advertising
- Replies: 4
- Views: 965
Re: pls evaluate my essay!! Task 2 - advertising
thank you Durai, would you please check this for me . also i would like to ask that what is the other words of information and advertisement? thank you ! beside this, could you give me advice of this essay as well. thank you very much!! http://www.ieltsnetwork.com/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=1321 Many p...
- Mon Apr 28, 2014 8:44 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls evaluate my essay!! Task 2 - advertising
- Replies: 4
- Views: 965
pls evaluate my essay!! Task 2 - advertising
Many parents think advertising only tells information about snacks and toys to children. But companies think advertising also tells useful information. Discuss both views and give you own opinion. In the present age, advertising is an indispensable part of our life. Many parents argue that advertise...
- Mon Apr 28, 2014 5:45 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls check my letter ! thank you
- Replies: 3
- Views: 826
Re: pls check my letter ! thank you
thank you Cindy! i am not gd at writing. so your comments will help me a lot!!
just one thing I beleive that this is correct sentence" Allow me to elaborate on why I am so perturbed." because I learn it from Ryan's video.
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just one thing I beleive that this is correct sentence" Allow me to elaborate on why I am so perturbed." because I learn it from Ryan's video.
- Mon Apr 28, 2014 4:16 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls check my letter ! thank you
- Replies: 3
- Views: 826
Re: pls check my letter ! thank you
can anyone help me? thank you
- Sat Apr 26, 2014 9:17 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls give me a band score for Task 2 - smoking
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1263
pls give me a band score for Task 2 - smoking
In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree? In the majority of nations, it is illicit to smoke in public areas. Some people suggest that this is unfair to pro-smoking group. ...
- Sat Apr 26, 2014 6:38 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls grade it !!task 1- invite friend to travel with you
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1047
Re: pls grade it !!task 1- invite friend to travel with you
Dear Durai,
could you please check my essay? i am confusing how to write this essay. i tried to follow Ryan's template. i believe u are familiar with his template. thank you for ur helping.
http://www.ieltsnetwork.com/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=1321
could you please check my essay? i am confusing how to write this essay. i tried to follow Ryan's template. i believe u are familiar with his template. thank you for ur helping.
http://www.ieltsnetwork.com/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=1321
- Fri Apr 25, 2014 10:40 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Task 2-Making changes in life. Please, correct it
- Replies: 7
- Views: 1722
Re: Task 2-Making changes in life. Please, correct it
hi guys, i am a bit confusing about the question. the first question is asking what kind of problems can this cause ? IS NOT asking " what the causes of this " so what kind of problem it has ? i think both essays did not point out it. pls go to this website, there is example essay of this ...
- Fri Apr 25, 2014 8:58 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls grade it !!task 1- invite friend to travel with you
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1047
Re: pls grade it !!task 1- invite friend to travel with you
anyone can check it for me? thank you
- Fri Apr 25, 2014 1:40 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls give me a band score for Task 2-resist making changes
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2813
pls give me a band score for Task 2-resist making changes
People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest? With such a fast pace of life, the human society is progressing rapidly in various fronts. Some people refuse to make any alteration in their lives. It is argued that among th...