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Task-2 : Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of high school students having pat time jobs. In today's world, education and money both are the important things in our life. Without it, one can not stand stable. This essay will analyze the advantages and disadvantages that arise when high school ...

Topic : Make a suggestion going out for the weekend. Dear Rudra, Seasons greetings Subject: Suggestion for going out for the weekend. I am writing this letter in connection with continuous holidays which are going to come in the next month. Due to our busy schedule, we are not imparting sufficient t...

Thank you for suggestion at which point i should improve. It will help me a lot.

In conclusion section , both thesis part should be shown , as well as futuristic effect. If i am wrong correct me.

Thank you once again.

What should i do to improve my essay writing?
Please guide me.

Thanks for correcting me. I realize where I have done my mistakes.

I will take care while co relating the two paragraphs and also the complex sentences.

Topic :A mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to phenomenon known as globalization. Some people fear that globalization will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this stat...

]TOPIC: Some people think that having a set of retirement age *(65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation is unfair . They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age . Do you agree or disagree/ Which type of workers do you think should benefit from...

HELLO DAVID I have read your essay. it finds an interesting , but i found some spelling mistakes which can you will improve it. Such as theoighor though or through ? not able to understand. A very silly mistake Most peiple or people. ahould be reliable and accountable in regilating , ou have mention...