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irmak wrote:According to me, the structure is good . You also used large range of words. Did you reach over 250 words?

311 words

Nowadays, some workplaces tend to employ equal numbers of men and women. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Indeed, the increasing importance of gender equality has encouraged many organisations to provide equal opportunities to both males and females. Whether or not such trend l...

Today, there is too much noise in the public places. What are the causes and what can we do about it? Indeed, the modern world setting has resulted in the ever increasing noise in public, which takes a heavy toll on people’s lives. I believe that uncontrolled vehicles, intense industrial activities ...

Printed newspapers and magazines will no longer exist. Do you agree or disagree? Indeed, information dispersal through paper based news and magazines is still prevalent and favoured by many. However, I believe such information carriers would be eventually replaced by advanced technologies, which req...

Some people believe that in order to give opportunities to new generation companies should encourage high level employees who are older than 55 to retire. Do you agree or disagree? Give your reasons and personal experience One of the contributing factors for a company to conduct a thriving business ...

Some people think that "vertical "City is the best, where people live and work in tall buildings. Others think that "horizontal" City is better, where there is few tall buildings. Discuss both views and give your opinion. People hold different views as to whether or not residing ...

Incorporating both problems and solutions in one paragraph is indeed a smart and logical approach. I will employ this way of responding to an essay question in my test tomorrow. Thank you very much for sharing!

Carlen

More and more employees work at home with modern technology. Some people claim that it benefits only workers, but not employers. To what extent do you agree or disagree? It is true that there have been an increasing number of people who choose to work remotely by using the Internet. However, I would...

Cheers!

Carlen

Hi mhingz and Allen, Thank you for your suggestions. I agree that I should make the examples used in my essay more specific. Probably using an example of a construction company would make my point more convincing. However, I am going to stick with my style as I feel very comfortable writing in this ...

Some people prefer to do the same job in the same place, but others prefer to change jobs frequently. You should use specific reasons to compare the advantages and disadvantages of both sides. People hold different opinions as to whether or not individuals should work in various types of jobs throug...

I suggest to have a better introduction paragraph because is too short. You did manage to give the positive and negative impact on equal number of men and women, but I dont see any solid example of such claims. On the conclusion, the statement "utilising an adaptive workforce " confuses m...

If possible, please give me a band mark. I am going to take the IELTS test on 17th May. I appreciate your help.

Cheers,
Carlen

Hi Flick,

Thank you for your correct. I have learn a great amount from you. I agree that I should put my own opinion in the conclusion.

Cheers,
Carlen

Nowadays, some workplaces tend to employ equal numbers of men and women. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? It is true that the improvements in gender equality have encouraged many organisations to recruit a similar number of male and female workers. However, I believe that it is...

I guess you are supposed to talk about something like music, arts, sports, pure science etc. Hi Allen, Thank you for your suggestion. I reckon that playing music, creating a piece of art work, being able to compete with other sports players and knowing how to conduct scientific research can all be ...

Many people believe that the main aim for university education is to help graduates to find better jobs, while some people believe that university education should aim at cultivating students’ overall abilities. What is your opinion? People hold different opinions as to whether university education ...

Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or bad thing? It is true that there have been an increasing number of people wearing stylish clothes with a view to pursuing fashion. There are several factors contributing to this trend, which has ...

There are different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays? It is true that the increasingly popular music of different types is putting forward more influences on in...

The best way to reduce the number of traffic accidents is to make all young drivers complete a safe driving education course before being licensed to drive. To what extent do you agree or disagree? It is true that the lack of safety awareness is one of the main factors contributing to the ever incre...

Some people believe that charity organizations should give the aid to those who are in great needs, while others think that charity organizations should concentrate on helping people who live in their own country. Discuss both views and give your opinion It is true that there are certain advantages ...

Hi allen,

In case like : I want to return the book (that/which) I borrowed from you yesterday.
that or which can be omitted.

However, using "that" after I think, I believe, it means, it indicates, it implies and etc. is a must.

Hope this is helpful

In many countries today insufficient respect is shown to older people. What do you think may be the reasons for this? What problems might this cause in society? It is true that the contemporary world setting has resulted in less respect being shown towards the elders . There are several factors con...

Hi IndianHurry, Thanks for your correction, I do not know what criteria you used to give a band score like this. I believe I did not make noticeable grammatical mistakes in this essay and I answered the question clearly and logically with good lexical resources. If the band mark you gave were true, ...

Hi Allen,
Good essay. Using more advanced vocab can add more charm to your essay.

Cheers
Carlen