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Dear, I would like to rewrite this topic because my first writing on it was not good. Please assist me to evaluate and correct my mistakes Thanks The given chart represents the various purposes why adult people decide to study. Besides, the pie chart illustrates how the course should be funded by di...

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Tam

The chart illustrates the various reasons of adult people who decide to study. In addition, the given pie chart offers information about the cost of each course should be share by several resources. According to the chart, two groups of adult people who join in study for being interest in subjects a...

Dear Mr David,
I would like to resend my writing task 1 with its topic.
Thanks for your help
Best regards,
Jamy

Task 1 Topic: The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pir chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. The chart illustrates the various reasons of adult people who decide to st...