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Could you please let me know your feedback about my writing? Some people believe that international tourism have harmful effects. Why do they think so? How to change their view? ~~~ Despite a vast range of benefits coming from tourism industry, especially international tourism, there are a number of...

Please help me to evaluate my writing by letting me know your feedback. The use of mobile phone is as anti-social as smoking. Smoking is banned at certain places, so the mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree? ~~~ Nowadays, the globe has been witnessing t...

Please help me to review my essay by leaving comments. I would be very grateful when knowing your feedback. Some people say government should give the health care the first priorities, some others believe there are more important priorities to spend the tax payers’ money. Discuss both views. ~~~ By ...

Could you please review my Task 2 essay and let me know your feedback? It has been suggested that all young adults should be required to undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community. Would the drawbacks of such a requirement be greater than the benefits to the community and the ...

Hi David Thanks for your feedback. I think the second reason should be air pollution and noise, which could probably cause inconvenience while people are walking. However, could you suggest any solutions for this problem? Actually I could not come up with any apart from a walking race/contest that s...

Could you please review my Task 2 essay? The world natural resources are consumed at an ever increasing rate. What is the dangers of this situation? What should we do? ~~~ Nowadays, the globe has been facing plenty of serious problems including environmental issues. According to recent reports, the ...

Please help me to evaluate my writing. Your comments will help me a lot. Fewer and fewer people walk on a daily basis. What are the reasons and how to encourage them to spend their time walking? ~~~ Recently, there have been major changes in all aspects of life, including transport. People now prefe...

Please help me improve my writing by leaving a comment, especially when you see something I need to correct. I would be very grateful ^^. Scientists agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food. Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people. Other...

I've written this to practice academic writing. Hope I'll get several helpful comments from you all. Please leave your comments, especially when you spot a mistake to help me improve my writing ^^ Too much emphasis is placed on going to university for academic education. People should be encourage t...

Hi Jordan Thank you so much. Your feedback help me a lot. May I ask what score you would give if you were the examiner? Hi Jenny, I have provided some feedback to your essay below. Examiners will grade your exam based on these criteria: how well you followed the task, how well the essay flows, how w...

Thanks so much, Flick, for your feedback. I am so shocked and embarrassed seeing my work full of mistakes. It's about time I would pay more attention on grammar. I've written this to practice academic writing. Hope I'll get several helpful comments from you all. 'Whether or not someone achieve their...

Thanks for reading and checking my work, David. I should really work harder on grammar

Please have a look at it and feel free to comment on my writing. Your comments would be an essential elements for me to improve my writing. The leaders or directors of organizations are often older people, but some people say that young people can also be leaders. ~~ There has been a common belief t...

I've written this to practice academic writing. Hope I'll get several helpful comments from you all. 'Whether or not someone achieve their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?' ~~~ How to become successful is always one of the most concerning issues among pe...