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Hello! The first main problem with this essay is that you make very definitive statements (e.g. They are not interested in doing activities). These statements may be true for some children, but are absolutely not true for all children, possibly not even the majority. You say that smartphones encour...

Would you please review my Task 2 writing? ;) Studies have shown that children are spending more time watching television and less time doing active or creative activities. Explain why this is the case. Suggest possible measures that can encourage children to participate in active or creative activi...