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by KenAdelaide
Mon May 22, 2017 1:40 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: kindly review my T2 essay thank you
Replies: 1
Views: 1481

kindly review my T2 essay thank you

Some people prefer renting than buying a home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting your home? In recent years, there have been a growing number of people who prefer renting a house or an apartment rather than buying one, especially for those who have recently graduated from universi...
by KenAdelaide
Sat Mar 04, 2017 11:40 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: kindly review my T2 essay thank you
Replies: 1
Views: 1355

kindly review my T2 essay thank you

Computer technologies are more accessible and cheaper, as the result, more adults work at home and children study at home. Is this a positive or negative development? --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Due to the proliferation of computers ...
by KenAdelaide
Mon Dec 05, 2016 1:44 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: kindly help me review my T2 essay thank you
Replies: 2
Views: 1118

kindly help me review my T2 essay thank you

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? A number of educationists state that starting to learn another language at primary school benefits children m...
by KenAdelaide
Wed Sep 21, 2016 10:31 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: hi, kindly review my essay, thank you
Replies: 2
Views: 887

hi, kindly review my essay, thank you

Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view? --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Art galleries in are often vis...
by KenAdelaide
Tue Sep 20, 2016 1:49 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: G, T1 letter, please kindly review it thank you
Replies: 3
Views: 1719

Re: G, T1 letter, please kindly review it thank you

Thank you for the comments!
by KenAdelaide
Sat Sep 17, 2016 11:21 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please help me improve this essay
Replies: 1
Views: 1216

please help me improve this essay

first of all, I greatly appreciate those who gave me comments about my essays/letters :) After seeing David's comments on my last essay, I decided to rewrite it, please have a look and I look forward to having feedback/suggestions ---------------------------------------------------------------------...
by KenAdelaide
Thu Sep 15, 2016 2:19 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: kindly review my essay, thank you
Replies: 2
Views: 2122

kindly review my essay, thank you

Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree? It has been debated for many years whether students in schools and universities should focus on acade...
by KenAdelaide
Tue Sep 13, 2016 12:24 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: G, T1 letter, please kindly review it thank you
Replies: 3
Views: 1719

G, T1 letter, please kindly review it thank you

Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter  Give details of how your friends or family use the centre  Explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community...
by KenAdelaide
Tue Sep 13, 2016 11:22 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: hi, kindly review my essay, thank you
Replies: 2
Views: 4273

Re: hi, kindly review my essay, thank you

Thanks a lot for your feedback, and it is really helpful. I just got a few questions, I hope you would kindly answer them. 1. I googled clothes, it says the word "clothes" is always used as plural in English, so why should I change "depend" to "depends"? 2. In the last ...
by KenAdelaide
Mon Sep 12, 2016 12:20 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: hi, kindly review my essay, thank you
Replies: 2
Views: 4273

hi, kindly review my essay, thank you

Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Some psychologists cla...