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by chaiguy
Mon Apr 07, 2014 11:07 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls help!! Task 1 apply the job
Replies: 4
Views: 5509

Re: pls help!! Task 1 apply the job

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter in response to your advertisement (Where was this advertisement? The local newspaper? If so, name the paper and also the day it was released) . From this notice , I see that you are in need of someone to show local visitors around the local tourist spots and...
by chaiguy
Mon Apr 07, 2014 10:51 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate Letter
Replies: 4
Views: 2745

Re: Please evaluate Letter

Dear Sir or Madam, On Monday 31st March (Add the year) , I purchased an Apple iPhone 5 from you and received an order number of 43562PN. Unfortunately, I had a very poor experience due to a sub-standard delivery service. At the time of purchase, I was told that my new iPhone would be delivered to m...
by chaiguy
Mon Apr 07, 2014 10:37 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: another letter! pls help me :)
Replies: 2
Views: 805

Re: another letter! pls help me :)

Dear Mr. Wood, I am writing this letter to inform you about my interest in joining a Tourism Management course at the Alexander College. The course which I would like to join will run between September 1st (Add a year here) and November 30th (Add a year here) . (I have removed this sentence as I do...
by chaiguy
Mon Apr 07, 2014 10:20 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Application letter - anybody please asses it.
Replies: 2
Views: 1047

Re: Application letter - anybody please asses it.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you regarding the Tour Guide position posted in the local newspaper (name the paper. Also state the date when Tour Guide position was listed in the newspaper) . I believe I fulfill your requirements and hope that you will consider my application. I recently started a...
by chaiguy
Fri Apr 04, 2014 1:47 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: TASK I
Replies: 1
Views: 1269

Re: TASK I

The graph below compares the unemployment rates in the United States and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. The graph illustrates data compares the umemployment rates in the United States and Japan between March ...
by chaiguy
Fri Apr 04, 2014 1:36 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please evaluate task 2
Replies: 3
Views: 2702

Re: please evaluate task 2

Over the last decade, obesity in children has increased one fifth (You should use '20%' here) in W estern countries. Start a new paragraph here) Day by day, governments are spending more and more tax money on health care due to the increase of various diseases and illnesses (List them - for example...
by chaiguy
Fri Apr 04, 2014 1:09 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls check my letter! thanks a lot
Replies: 2
Views: 1189

Re: pls check my letter! thanks a lot

You are a student at University of Sydney. Your ID card has been stolen. Write to the Local Police Station, giving details of who you are, what happened and asking what you should do to get a new ID card. Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Janis Lam and I come from Malaysia. I recently arrived as an overse...
by chaiguy
Fri Apr 04, 2014 12:42 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please help to assess this letter.
Replies: 4
Views: 944

Re: Please help to assess this letter.

Dear Sir or Madam, (Add a space here to separate your introduction and your first sentence...) I am writing to seek for a part-time job as an IELTS teacher. I am 28 years old and currently working for the (<<< remove this ' the ') Stone River P rimary S chool (which city/town is this school based i...
by chaiguy
Mon Mar 31, 2014 2:20 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travel
Replies: 2
Views: 3729

Re: The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists tr

The chart shows how many Japanese tourists travelled abroad during a ten-year period , while also showing Australia's market share for Japanese tourists . It can be clearly seen that there was an upward trend in the number of tourists throughout the period shown . It is also clear that Australia wi...
by chaiguy
Mon Mar 31, 2014 2:00 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task I.please,evaluate my essay
Replies: 1
Views: 851

Re: Task I.please,evaluate my essay

The charts below show the levels of participation in education and science in developing and industrialised countries in two separate years: 1980 and 1990 (I added this to prevent confusion - some people may interpret it as the years between 1980 and 1990) . The charts show how many people were in ...
by chaiguy
Mon Mar 31, 2014 1:39 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Co-education
Replies: 2
Views: 13701

Re: Co-education

Co-education is the integration of male and female students in the same educational environment . Coeducation is always a controversial topic among the (<<<remove the ' the ' here) people from different countries. Additionally, I believe the system could be improved in many ways. Co-education can h...
by chaiguy
Mon Mar 31, 2014 1:18 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls help!!
Replies: 1
Views: 619

Re: pls help!!

Some people think students should go to private secondary schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In the present age, schooling plays a pivotal role for those individuals who want success. Some people argue that students should attend private secondary schools , while on the other hand, t...
by chaiguy
Sun Mar 30, 2014 6:22 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: creative artists should always be given the fredom to exprss
Replies: 2
Views: 1533

Re: creative artists should always be given the fredom to ex

There is no doubt that exquisite art forms can only be born if their creators enjoy complete freedom during the production process . It's obvious that the (<<< you can change 'the' to 'all' here) masterpieces of legendary artists have been made without any government interference (<<<remove the 's'...