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Hi everyone, I'd like to take this opportunity to say a big thank you to Ryan and all the other persons who offered guidance, feedback,correction and support during my IELTS preparation. I also thank the students who took the time to read my essays. I've attained a band score of 7.0 with my individu...

Thanks Flick. You brought a big smile on my face just now. I really needed to hear these encouraging words a week ago when I did my IELTS exam. In reflection I realize the power of positive words and encouragement especially during your lowest times. I therefore ask of you to continue providing feed...

Thanks again Flick. I was indecisive and therefore chose to agree with both sides. The fact that you asked what my opinion is, I gather I shouldn't have done that or you didn't clearly see that I had agreed with both sides. Could you please let me know which is it? Thanks.

Thanks Flick for evaluating my essay. The corrections you made to my sentence structure have definitely made my points clearer and allow the sentences to flow better. Thanks again.

Ryan please evaluate this essay as well. Thank you very much. In your opinion, what factors contribute to a good movie? ​The cinematography industry is a very competitive one. Critics’ review of a movie can either positively or negatively affect the box office sale of a particular film. In my view, ...

Ryan could you please evaluate my essay thank you In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with older people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who should be responsible for our old people? Give reasons. ​The aging p...

Please assess my essay thanks in advance. Does modern technology make life more convenient, or was life better when technology simpler? ​One of the world’s greatest inventions is the computer. Since then, there have been even more dramatic improvements. It is argued that modern technology has made l...

Hi Durai, thanks for your comments and suggestions. Based on all the knowledge I am acquiring as it relates to essay writing I can definitely see the weak links in this essay and even the one I submitted before. With further practice I hope to make great improvements in the future. Thanks again.

Thanks Chi, I'll take note of your remarks. Essay writing is still a learning process for me. I hope to master it one day though.

No doubt, you have written an excellent essay and I would rate it far above 7.I will suggest you to check ryan pattern that reflects in my essay.This pattern will improve your already polished English for IELTS pattern, I tried my best but I could not find any improvement that I could suggest.I hav...

allen_zhang wrote:I would never be able to write an essay like this.
However, 400 words! How could anyone write such an essay in 40 minutes?

I didn't count the number of words. I wasn't focusing on the number of words actually I just wanted to get the ideas across.

allen_zhang wrote:I would never be able to write an essay like this.
However, 400 words! How could anyone write such an essay in 40 minutes?

I am sure you will,with practice you can do way better. Thanks for your feedback.

andytruong1202 wrote:Strong grammar. Would be band 7+

Thank you.

​Question: Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the government of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves? “Give a man a fish and feed him for a day: teach a man to ...

namkeotn wrote:I think you should search google for this question, there will be many examples. After that everyone will discuss together.

Thanks for the suggestion.

Hi Rosh, I think there are some positive things going on in this demonstration. For one, I see signs of solid lexical use in many of your sentences. Sentences like "In today’s society emphasis is placed on social class and material gains." demonstrate a certain mastery of the language not...

Pelease provide feedback to my attempt at this question. I am particularly concerned about whether I've interpreted the question correctly or not. Thank you. Question: A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old fashioned values, such as hono...

Please provide feedback on this task 2 essay question. A person's worth nowadays seem to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old fashioned values, such as honour, kindness, and trust no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give ...

Please provide feedback on this task 2 essay question. A person's worth nowadays seem to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old fashioned values, such as honour, kindness, and trust no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give ...