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- Tue May 06, 2014 1:25 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Task 2 -- Intro.. Please help to improve
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1275
Re: Task 2 -- Intro.. Please help to improve
Hi Flick, Please have a look. Thanks heaps. Nowadays, technology is widely used in the classroom and both student and academia heavily rely on this. Technology can broaden knowledge, expand minds and provide comprehensive information on any subject. However, technology is not the panacea for everyth...
- Sun May 04, 2014 1:51 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Task 2 -- Intro.. Please help to improve
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1275
Re: Task 2 -- Intro.. Please help to improve
Hi Flick, I have written following introduction can you please look. Look forward for your comment. Thanks heaps. 'Nowadays, technology is widely used in the classroom. It can broaden the knowledge, expands minds and provides comprehensive information on any subject. However, technology is not the p...
- Sun Sep 15, 2013 12:07 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please give some tips on my essay .
- Replies: 14
- Views: 6829
Re: Please give some tips on my essay .
Hi Tina,
I provided some feedback check your mail please.
Cheers
I provided some feedback check your mail please.
Cheers
- Wed Sep 11, 2013 1:14 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please check my academic task 2
- Replies: 10
- Views: 4589
Re: Please check my academic task 2
Hi Tina, I have written this essay might be helpful for you. Nowadays, children have been using computer for various reasons. Many people believe that computer do a little good for a child hence its usage should be restricted. However, it is argued that computer is very good for the children. This e...
- Wed Sep 11, 2013 10:11 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: bank letter need feedback
- Replies: 13
- Views: 8955
Re: bank letter need feedback
Hi Saran, Try this one might be helpful. Dear Mr Peter, I am writing this regarding an overdue notice which I received from your bank. Here, I would like to highlight that there is a mistake on the part of your branch and due to which this account was overdrawn. In this regard, I would like to menti...
- Tue Sep 10, 2013 6:19 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Hi Ryan can you please check my essay
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2834
Hi Ryan can you please check my essay
These days in many countries various governments have been increasing retirement age. What do you think increasing this age is good or bad? Nowadays, there is a different superannuation age in various countries and it is a paradoxical debate that what should be the ideal retirement age. It is argued...