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by Raj
Tue May 06, 2014 1:25 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 -- Intro.. Please help to improve
Replies: 5
Views: 1275

Re: Task 2 -- Intro.. Please help to improve

Hi Flick, Please have a look. Thanks heaps. Nowadays, technology is widely used in the classroom and both student and academia heavily rely on this. Technology can broaden knowledge, expand minds and provide comprehensive information on any subject. However, technology is not the panacea for everyth...
by Raj
Sun May 04, 2014 1:51 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 -- Intro.. Please help to improve
Replies: 5
Views: 1275

Re: Task 2 -- Intro.. Please help to improve

Hi Flick, I have written following introduction can you please look. Look forward for your comment. Thanks heaps. 'Nowadays, technology is widely used in the classroom. It can broaden the knowledge, expands minds and provides comprehensive information on any subject. However, technology is not the p...
by Raj
Sun Sep 15, 2013 12:07 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please give some tips on my essay .
Replies: 14
Views: 6829

Re: Please give some tips on my essay .

Hi Tina,
I provided some feedback check your mail please.
Cheers
by Raj
Wed Sep 11, 2013 1:14 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please check my academic task 2
Replies: 10
Views: 4589

Re: Please check my academic task 2

Hi Tina, I have written this essay might be helpful for you. Nowadays, children have been using computer for various reasons. Many people believe that computer do a little good for a child hence its usage should be restricted. However, it is argued that computer is very good for the children. This e...
by Raj
Wed Sep 11, 2013 10:11 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: bank letter need feedback
Replies: 13
Views: 8955

Re: bank letter need feedback

Hi Saran, Try this one might be helpful. Dear Mr Peter, I am writing this regarding an overdue notice which I received from your bank. Here, I would like to highlight that there is a mistake on the part of your branch and due to which this account was overdrawn. In this regard, I would like to menti...
by Raj
Tue Sep 10, 2013 6:19 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hi Ryan can you please check my essay
Replies: 2
Views: 2834

Hi Ryan can you please check my essay

These days in many countries various governments have been increasing retirement age. What do you think increasing this age is good or bad? Nowadays, there is a different superannuation age in various countries and it is a paradoxical debate that what should be the ideal retirement age. It is argued...