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People have different views on whether the countryside or big cities are the better place for children to grow up in. While I accept that living in rural areas has certain benefits for children’s growth, I believe that cities are more suitable for children. On the one hand, growing up in rural areas...

Thanks katsenis for taking time out to rate my essay. I beg to differ with the following suggestion: 1. the use of article "the" in the last para refers to "traffic congestion" written in the first para. So the usage to me seems correct. 2. " environment friendly" is co...

Can anyone pls rate my essay and provide valuable suggestions for improvement? Thank you.

Traffic congestion is becoming huge problem for many major cities. Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce traffic in big cities. With an increase in the number of vehicles on roads, the problem of traffic congestion has assumed alarming proportions in several major cities of the world....

Hi andytruong1202, Thank you for sparing time and providing your valuable inputs! 1. I agree that the second paragraph could have been made more elaborate by giving relevant examples. 2. I believe that the sentence "predominantly inactive lifestyle , thus leading to corpulence" should be m...

All over the world, the number of overweight people is growing. What do you feel are the main causes of this? What are the effects? Obesity among people worldwide has surfaced as a serious threat to human health. It has increased at an alarming rate globally, especially during the past 40 years of ...

All over the world, the number of overweight people is growing. What do you feel are the main causes of this? What are the effects? Obesity among people worldwide has surfaced as a serious threat to human health. It has increased at an alarming rate globally, especially during the past 40 years of h...