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Thank you very much Mr. Joe for your precious comments and i will surely try to overcome my mistakes in future. Hello, Here are my comments and reflections on your essays. If you have any questions, feel free to contact me. I have detailed the strong parts of the essays first, followed by some areas...

Many parents think it is necessary to teach children about money. Do you agree or disagree? Include your own reasons and share your experience and knowledge. Money is the most important thing in today’s modern world for living happily. Therefore, everyone is trying to earn and save as much money as ...