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Instead of asking the government to bear the cost of higher education, students should pay tuition fees themselves. DO you agree? It is always been argued that whether the authority should pay for tertiary education, or it should be paid by students themselves. In this essay, i tend to disagree wit...

Hi there, it seems you have gone off topic. Here's my little suggestion, hope it helps! In your introduction, you said that you agree with the idea that funding in health awareness is vital, then in your main para 1, you should explain this fact, instead of elaborating your disagreement. Main Para 2...

Some people believe that charities should give aid to those who need the aid most, wherever they live. Others believe that charitable organisation would better concentrate on people in their own countries instead. Discuss. Charity organisations are supporting society in dealing with many issues. Wh...

Hi David, i'd revise this essay as follow. Please comments in terms of marking criterias. Thanks! The relative importance of the economic status and the country is a controversial debate when politicians and economists try to analyse countries' developments. While some believe that we should emphas...

Hi David, thanks for your evaluation. i don't like this question either. It's so difficult to answer and analyse in detailed. i'd revise for many times but it still doesnt sound right to me. I'll work on it again to build a cohesive essay.. thanks much!

It is generally believed that education is of vital importance to the development of individuals and the well-being of societies. What should education consist of to fulfil both these functions? Education is significantly affecting the individual’s development as well as society’s wellbeing. Unders...

Some people think that when recruiting, company should aim to take on people who are innovative and are able to work independently while others considered they should recruit people who are able to work in a team and follow instructions. Discuss both and give your own opinion. Recruiting a suitable...

It is generally believed that education is of vital importance to the development of individuals and the well-being of societies. What should education consist of to fulfil both these functions? Education is significantly affecting the individual’s development as well as society’s wellbeing. Underst...

feedback and advice are currently available only to test takers in Australia. This is a pilot project to help shape the content of feedback and advice that will become available globally at a later stage of the project. The provision of this feedback and advice is to be used for guidance only. Above...

Hi, i'd got the result. unfortunately, it dropped to band 6 in writing. Here's the feedback given. With Academic Task 1, focus on getting all the details of the graph correct. For Task 2, try to give equal space to each part of the question. Check that your conclusion follows on logically from the b...

Hi guys, can you all please share if you had sit any recent IETLS test in Australia? Thanks!

wt1foc_thous.gif This graph illustrates the changes of the number of labour force that employed in Australia mining industry from 1900 to 1990. Units are measured in thousand. At the beginning of the century, more than 60000 people (1900) were recruited in the mining industry. The figure began to d...

Hi, i attempted Task 2 first. There was not much different from what i practiced before, but i suppose it was a little bit difficult topic as it talked about renewable energy instead of education. i mentioned the degree of my agreement (which was agree) in the introduction and conclusion. I paraphra...

Hi David, Please assist to evaluate my speaking.. possible to achieve band 8? If not, could you please tell me what else i can do to achieve band 8? Thanks Much!!

Hi guys, if you have done Academic one on 1/10 and 8/10 (coming soon), please share the questions here! Thanks! i did one on 24/9. QUestions as below: Writing Task 1: Table Writing Task 2: Alternative for fossil fuels. To what extend do you agree it's a positive or negative development? Speaking Par...

Could essay below possibly achieve band 7? Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both and give your opinion. It is true that economic growth is essential to a n...

Hi Flick,

one question is that is it not possible to use "one/ones" for people/things in ielts essay?

Please help clarify. Thanks!

Thanks Flick! I just felt something was wrong with my grammar but couldn't sort it out before. The whole essay sounds smoother now!

9/7/16 Writing Topics writing task 1: Line graph===> Compares the difference in income of 5 countries. Task 2: Today's children are spending more time in watching television instead of active or creative things. What are the causes and what possible measures to encourage children to be more active o...

Many young people have unsupervised access to the Internet and are using the Internet to socialise with others. This has can lead to a number of dangerous situations which can be threatening for children. What problems do children face when going online without parental supervision? How can these p...

pie.png The pie chart outlines the energy production of 5 different energy sources (coal, gas, petro, nuclear and other) in France in 1995 and 2005. Units are measured in percentage. Overall, most of the energy production saw a growing trend except petro which had reduced during 2005. Apart from th...

Thanks David! The thing is if I extend the elaboration more detail, I wonder the word count is going to be too much as now the word count below is 202. What do you suggest?

IMG_4665 [219044].jpg The line graph outlines the global water use by three sectors in a century while the table demonstrates the water consumptions of 2 nations in 2000. As can be seen from the graph, three sectors’ water usage experienced a growing trend throughout the century. The agriculture’s ...

Some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world it’s wiser to marry for money. Discuss and give your own opinion. In today’s uncertain and materialised world, people often argue as to neither marry for love nor money. This is a question that has no definite answer as...

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree? There has been a debate that fostering unpaid community...