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- Thu Mar 02, 2017 9:20 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: please correct my essay, task2 (academic)
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please correct my essay, task2 (academic)
Some people suggest that children do not understand the world of work and schools should make all teenagers spend a short time working as well as studying academic subjects. To what extent do you agree?[/color] It is generally accepted that working and studying educational subjects is two sides of t...
- Thu Jan 19, 2017 3:40 pm
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- Topic: please correct my essay, task 1
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please correct my essay, task 1
The graph gives information about how many male and female Canadian students are graduated from Canada over the 15 years. Having a glance at graph release although both groups passed a rising trend, always the number of women who finished their educations was higher than men. Looking closely to the ...
- Wed Jan 18, 2017 8:04 pm
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- Topic: please correct my essay, task 1
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please correct my essay, task 1
The table compares the number of cell phones that have been sold between 5 brands from 2006 to 20012. Having looked at the table shows both Samsung and Apple experienced a dramatic upward trend during this six years. However the number of sales in Samsung was greater than Apple, beginning from 117 i...