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by EnglishTeacher
Wed Apr 23, 2014 12:24 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls grade my letter - asking for loan
Replies: 3
Views: 1156

Re: pls grade my letter - asking for loan

As an international student in Sweden, you have an account with a local bank. The monthly bank transfer you receive from your parents has been delayed this month due to an error at your parents’ bank. Write a letter to your bank. In your letter: introduce yourself and ask for a loan, say why you ne...
by EnglishTeacher
Wed Apr 23, 2014 12:21 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: General Writing - Task1-Letter to a Friend
Replies: 2
Views: 875

Re: General Writing - Task1-Letter to a Friend

Keeping up with Ryan's suggestion of writing daily, below is my take on a letter to a friend. Opinion/suggestions/band score welcome your friend is visiting you for a week. However, the dates that he/she is visiting are not suitable for you. write a letter to him/her and 1. Apologize 2. explain why...
by EnglishTeacher
Wed Apr 23, 2014 12:19 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: My first essay following Ryan's template
Replies: 3
Views: 1688

Re: My first essay following Ryan's template

Dear community, This is my first post and I'm Anton from Kiev, Ukraine. All my writings have been scored band 6 to 6.5 for last few months. However, I've bought the Ryan's e-book recently and have wrote an essay following his 15 sentences template, paying closer attention to linking and discussing ...
by EnglishTeacher
Mon Apr 21, 2014 4:00 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: AC writing task 2. Machine translation. Review please!
Replies: 2
Views: 1136

Re: AC writing task 2. Machine translation. Review please!

Machine translation (MT) is slower and less accurate than human translation and there is no immediate or predictable likelihood of machines taking over this role from humans. Do you agree or disagree? ------------------------------------------------------------- Our world has changed greatly over t...
by EnglishTeacher
Mon Apr 21, 2014 3:56 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please tell my mistakes and band deserving for this essay
Replies: 2
Views: 871

Re: please tell my mistakes and band deserving for this ess

[quote="neha"]Creative artists should be given the freedom to express their own ideas. There should be no government restrictions. Do you agree or disagree? - -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------...
by EnglishTeacher
Mon Apr 21, 2014 3:47 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: My first task 2 Essay. Need your feedback
Replies: 2
Views: 751

Re: My first task 2 Essay. Need your feedback

Below is my first task 2 essay. I have tried to keep the essay structure as suggested by you Ryan. Would love to hear from you and others what you think on this. An increasing number of people are changing their career and place of residence several times in their li ves . Do you think this is a po...