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by HelenSun
Thu Mar 30, 2017 6:14 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2. The gap between the rich and the poor. Could you please evaluate
Replies: 0
Views: 2671

Task 2. The gap between the rich and the poor. Could you please evaluate

You valuable feedback is needed. Many thanks in advance. Question: Many people say the gap between rich and poor people is wider, as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer. What problems could this situation cause and what measures can be done to address those problems? Response: It i...
by HelenSun
Fri Mar 24, 2017 5:55 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2. The trend to choose subjects. Could you please evaluate
Replies: 0
Views: 3040

Task 2. The trend to choose subjects. Could you please evaluate

Your valuable feedback is needed. Many thanks in advance. Question: In some schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts subjects (e.g. literature), and boys tend to choose science subjects (e.g. physics). Why do you think this is so? Should this tendency be changed? Response: It has been obs...
by HelenSun
Wed Mar 22, 2017 8:34 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2. Online courses. Please evaluate
Replies: 1
Views: 1517

Task 2. Online courses. Please evaluate

Question: Some universities offers online courses for students. Do you think this is a positive or negative development for students? Response: Owing to development of software technologies, it has become possible to study online in some universities. In my opinion, I believe that this is positive d...
by HelenSun
Mon Mar 20, 2017 9:18 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2. The subway (attempt 3). Please evaluate
Replies: 4
Views: 2146

Re: Task 2. The subway (attempt 3). Please evaluate

Hello!

Thank you very much for your correction.

Regarding the sentence you did not understand, there was an error:
I meant 'mood' instead of 'mode'
by HelenSun
Thu Mar 16, 2017 6:56 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: General Task 1. Suggestion to a friend. Please evaluate
Replies: 1
Views: 3381

General Task 1. Suggestion to a friend. Please evaluate

Your valueable feedback is needed regarding any mistake, vocabulary range, grammar, response understanding, suggestions to improve and etc. Many thanks in advance. Question: You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You thin...
by HelenSun
Wed Mar 15, 2017 12:51 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: General Task 1. Sport and leisure. Please evaluate
Replies: 2
Views: 2101

Re: General Task 1. Sport and leisure. Please evaluate

Hello!

Thank you a lot for your answer.

1. 'Trainegers' - I meant 'equipment for training muscles'.

2. 'To employ our leisure' - I meant 'to spend free time' using word 'leisure.'
Or a mistake was in 'our'?
by HelenSun
Tue Mar 14, 2017 6:25 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: General Task 1. Sport and leisure. Please evaluate
Replies: 2
Views: 2101

General Task 1. Sport and leisure. Please evaluate

Your valueable feedback is needed regarding any mistake, vocabulary range, grammar, response understanding, suggestions to improve and etc. What phrases or sentences are irrelevant and you do not like? Many thanks in advance. Question: Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure c...
by HelenSun
Sun Mar 12, 2017 6:46 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2. Solutions to global warming (attempt 3). Please evaluate
Replies: 0
Views: 2162

Task 2. Solutions to global warming (attempt 3). Please evaluate

Your valueable feedback is needed regarding any mistake, vocabulary range, grammar, response understanding, suggestions to improve and etc. Are the main ideas relevant and how well are they expanded and supported? What phrases or sentences are irrelevant and you do not like? Many thanks in advance Q...
by HelenSun
Sun Mar 12, 2017 1:07 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2. The subway (attempt 3). Please evaluate
Replies: 4
Views: 2146

Task 2. The subway (attempt 3). Please evaluate

Your valueable feedback is needed regarding any mistake, vocabulary range, grammar, response understanding, suggestions to improve and etc. Are the main ideas relevant and how well are they expanded and supported? What phrases or sentences are irrelevant and you do not like? Many thanks in advance. ...
by HelenSun
Wed Mar 01, 2017 6:50 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2. Study abroad. Please evaluate
Replies: 1
Views: 1461

Task 2. Study abroad. Please evaluate

Your valueable feedback is needed regarding any mistake, vocabulary range, grammar, response understanding, suggestions to improve and etc. Are the main ideas relevant and how well are they expanded and supported? What phrases or sentences are irrelevant and you do not like? Many thanks in advance Q...
by HelenSun
Mon Feb 27, 2017 5:51 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: General Task 1. Airport. Please evaluate
Replies: 4
Views: 2316

Re: General Task 1. Airport. Please evaluate

Thank you very much!
by HelenSun
Sat Feb 25, 2017 1:54 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: General Task 1. Job. Please evaluate
Replies: 1
Views: 1213

General Task 1. Job. Please evaluate

Your valueable feedback is needed regarding any mistake, vocabulary range, grammar, response understanding and etc. What phrases or sentences are irrelevant and you do not like? Many thanks in advance. Question: You missed an important business meeting. Write a letter explaining what happened and in...
by HelenSun
Thu Feb 23, 2017 7:01 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2. Employment topic. Please evaluate
Replies: 4
Views: 5730

Re: Task 2. Employment topic. Please evaluate

Hello Flick,
Thank you a lot for your contribution and help for me.
by HelenSun
Mon Feb 20, 2017 1:55 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Reposted: Task 2. Solutions to global warming (attempt 2). Please evaluate
Replies: 2
Views: 1590

Reposted: Task 2. Solutions to global warming (attempt 2). Please evaluate

Your valueable feedback is needed regarding any mistake, vocabulary range, grammar, response understanding, suggestions to improve and etc. Are the main ideas relevant and how well are they expanded and supported? What phrases or sentences are irrelevant and you do not like? Many thanks in advance Q...
by HelenSun
Mon Feb 20, 2017 1:52 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Reposted: Task 2. The underground (attempt 2). Please evaluate
Replies: 2
Views: 1611

Reposted: Task 2. The underground (attempt 2). Please evaluate

Your valueable feedback is needed regarding any mistake, vocabulary range, grammar, response understanding, suggestions to improve and etc. Are the main ideas relevant and how well are they expanded and supported? What phrases or sentences are irrelevant and you do not like? Many thanks in advance Q...
by HelenSun
Sun Feb 19, 2017 2:17 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2. Environment topic. Please evaluate
Replies: 3
Views: 1654

Re: Task 2. Environment topic. Please evaluate

Hello David,

Thank you very much for your feedback.
by HelenSun
Thu Feb 16, 2017 9:03 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2. Transport topic. Please evaluate
Replies: 3
Views: 1795

Re: Task 2. Transport topic. Please evaluate

Hello David,

Thank you very much for your feedback.
by HelenSun
Mon Feb 13, 2017 10:18 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2. Employment topic. Please evaluate
Replies: 4
Views: 5730

Re: Task 2. Employment topic. Please evaluate

Thank you a lot for your reply
I will take it into account regarding 'reasonable conclusion'
by HelenSun
Mon Feb 13, 2017 10:11 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2. Effects of global warming. Please evaluate
Replies: 3
Views: 1756

Task 2. Effects of global warming. Please evaluate

Your valueable feedback is needed regarding vocabulary range, grammar, response understanding, mistakes and etc. Many thanks in advance Question: Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. What causes global warming? What effects are there to this problem. Response: In the rece...