reading gains knowledge or not???discuss both views
new a swimming pool inside the centre or outside..write a letter to planning committee
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- Sun Oct 13, 2013 6:31 am
- Forum: Latest IELTS questions
- Topic: oct 11 general melb
- Replies: 1
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- Mon Sep 16, 2013 1:13 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: PLEASE COMMENT ON MY ESSAY .
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Re: PLEASE COMMENT ON MY ESSAY .
use small letter ;it dont use capital It
- Mon Sep 16, 2013 1:09 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please give some tips on my essay .
- Replies: 14
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Re: Please give some tips on my essay .
hi tina, Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Nowadays, Change in life is almost inevitable rather than a choice in the fast pace world(in the fast...
- Sun Sep 15, 2013 4:18 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please give some tips on my essay .
- Replies: 14
- Views: 6829
Re: Please give some tips on my essay .
Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Nowadays, change in life is almost inevitable rather than a choice in (this) the fast pace world . Hence, Some...
- Sun Sep 15, 2013 2:39 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please give some tips on my essay .
- Replies: 14
- Views: 6829
Re: Please give some tips on my essay .
hi tina,
reframe and post the essay again...i think i will be online quite some time to post my essay and letter...thx
reframe and post the essay again...i think i will be online quite some time to post my essay and letter...thx
- Sun Sep 15, 2013 2:18 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please give some tips on my essay .
- Replies: 14
- Views: 6829
Re: Please give some tips on my essay .
hi tina, Introduction : view of otherss supporting 1 PARA 1 : taking about the concept of static life in positive, yes giving positive example of the same ,yes should i discuss the disadvantage also in the same para ?,no i prefer not to talk about the dis in same para conclude this particular concep...
- Sun Sep 15, 2013 1:06 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please give some tips on my essay .
- Replies: 14
- Views: 6829
Re: Please give some tips on my essay .
some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. The pace of life has shown a drastic shift over the last few decades due to the advancement in the technology ...
- Sun Sep 15, 2013 11:50 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please give some tips on my essay .
- Replies: 14
- Views: 6829
Re: Please give some tips on my essay .
hi raj,
post it here
post it here
- Sun Sep 15, 2013 11:42 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please give some tips on my essay .
- Replies: 14
- Views: 6829
Re: Please give some tips on my essay .
hi tina,
can I try review it or ?????
i am confused y u r writing firstly and secondly.....write on the other hand
can I try review it or ?????
i am confused y u r writing firstly and secondly.....write on the other hand
- Sat Sep 14, 2013 4:51 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Hi Ryan , please mark my essay .
- Replies: 6
- Views: 6136
Re: Hi Ryan , please mark my essay .
hi tina,
thanks.try to reframe the essay and post it here
thanks.try to reframe the essay and post it here
- Sat Sep 14, 2013 4:41 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Nursery school
- Replies: 6
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Re: Nursery school
hi tina and duong, please help me as well i am also on the same boat TOPIC: Should children go to nursery school prior to their primary studies? Share personal examples in your essay, if applicable. ANSWER: An often debated topic is whether parents should send their children to nurseries before prim...
- Fri Sep 13, 2013 11:44 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Hi Ryan , please mark my essay .
- Replies: 6
- Views: 6136
Re: Hi Ryan , please mark my essay .
hi Tina, it might help you but i remember i never ever reached band 7 first of all we are talking about good health so you have to use good health related sentance in many areas.so try to rephrase it well-being,physical fitness,good shape . Some people think that good health is a basic human need,so...
- Fri Sep 13, 2013 9:17 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: sponsorship letter need feedback
- Replies: 5
- Views: 3239
Re: sponsorship letter need feedback
hi ryan,
Thank you so much for reviewing my letter. with the help of your video and your comment I believe that I will get 7 band in writing.
Regards,
Saran
Thank you so much for reviewing my letter. with the help of your video and your comment I believe that I will get 7 band in writing.
Regards,
Saran
- Fri Sep 13, 2013 9:10 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: sponsorship letter need feedback
- Replies: 5
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Re: sponsorship letter need feedback
thank you so much Tina once again for your effort.
- Fri Sep 13, 2013 9:08 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: missing letter need feedback
- Replies: 4
- Views: 3756
Re: missing letter need feedback
thank you so much for your effort Tina.
- Thu Sep 12, 2013 8:59 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: sponsorship letter need feedback
- Replies: 5
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sponsorship letter need feedback
You have just found out you’ve been awarded sponsorship for a project you’ve been working on. Write a letter to your sponsor. In your letter • describe the details of the project • explain how the funds will be used
• write a message of appreciation for the support Write at least 150 words.
You do N...
- Thu Sep 12, 2013 7:50 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: missing letter need feedback
- Replies: 4
- Views: 3756
Re: missing letter need feedback
pls guys...review it...
- Thu Sep 12, 2013 7:25 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: bank letter need feedback
- Replies: 13
- Views: 8955
Re: bank letter need feedback
hi tina,
thank you so much... trying my best
thank you so much... trying my best
- Thu Sep 12, 2013 12:09 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: missing letter need feedback
- Replies: 4
- Views: 3756
missing letter need feedback
You lost something on the train. Write a letter to the stationmaster of your local train station. In your letter • state what the item is • describe where you think you lost it • explain how you can be contacted in the event the item is found Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any ad...
- Wed Sep 11, 2013 11:09 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: bank letter need feedback
- Replies: 13
- Views: 8955
Re: bank letter need feedback
thanks a lot to tina,raj and luciano.. improved letter...guys pls review it.. You received a letter from your bank stating that you will be charged £35 for a banking service you didn’t use. You know this information is incorrect. Write a letter to the bank. In your letter • write what the erroneous ...
- Wed Sep 11, 2013 12:37 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please check my academic task 2
- Replies: 10
- Views: 4587
Re: Please check my academic task 2
hi tina,,,
its quiet easy to write about your personal examples and u can justify your personal story...reader does not have a choice to counter attack..if you talk in general he knows what ur taking about...so its my advice to write personal example
its quiet easy to write about your personal examples and u can justify your personal story...reader does not have a choice to counter attack..if you talk in general he knows what ur taking about...so its my advice to write personal example
- Wed Sep 11, 2013 12:19 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: bank letter need feedback
- Replies: 13
- Views: 8955
Re: bank letter need feedback
hi tina,
october 11 my exam
when is ur exam...
october 11 my exam
when is ur exam...
- Wed Sep 11, 2013 12:14 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please check my academic task 2
- Replies: 10
- Views: 4587
Re: Please check my academic task 2
hi tina,,, try to use real time example,which is very difficult to counter attack by the reader. for example, take my cousin saran as an example.at the age of 10 he had postural problems , poor eye sight due to strain , persistent headache due to the excess use of computer for gaming............. do...
- Wed Sep 11, 2013 12:04 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: bank letter need feedback
- Replies: 13
- Views: 8955
Re: bank letter need feedback
With the help of my friends Tina and Raj I tried to reframe the letter…thanks a lot guys. Please feel free to comment on my letter You received a letter from your bank stating that you will be charged £35 for a banking service you didn’t use. You know this information is incorrect. Write a letter to...
- Wed Sep 11, 2013 10:59 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: bank letter need feedback
- Replies: 13
- Views: 8955
Re: bank letter need feedback
ok tina i will reframe it...and i will post it....thanks a lot....r u doing academic or general..