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- Wed Aug 16, 2017 1:40 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Hi can any one evaluate this and give me feed back
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Re: Hi can any one evaluate this and give me feed back
Indra, you have overused too many heavy words but the sense it makes wavers. I think you should pepper your essay with heavy vocabulary but not overdo it. Stick to the topic. Even simpler words can work their magic!
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