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- Thu Sep 04, 2014 11:10 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: task 2.6
- Replies: 2
- Views: 773
Re: task 2.6
thank you very much flick
- Thu Sep 04, 2014 8:49 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Competition Good or Bad for Children??
- Replies: 1
- Views: 3395
Re: Competition Good or Bad for Children??
Some believe that competition is good for children, while others say it is bad. Discuss both the views. Competition is a trend that has existed in the society since the dawn of time. Even children are inclined towards this movement either in school or outside it. Many people believe that competition...
- Thu Sep 04, 2014 8:36 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Talents By Birth
- Replies: 1
- Views: 655
Re: Talents By Birth
some people think that people are talent bybirth. while other think childrencan be taught to become best sportsman and musician. discuss A matter of considerable controversy at present is the issue of whether children can be taught to become sportsperson and musician, or rather these talents are obt...
- Thu Sep 04, 2014 7:54 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: please give feedback on y essay. appor band is more apprecia
- Replies: 3
- Views: 839
Re: please give feedback on y essay. appor band is more appr
One of the most important factor in the world decides about a person is it own character . This factore can judge a person very easily. Character plays a major role than experience of person in life which influences this personality and development. This (these) two parameters will be analysed befo...
- Wed Sep 03, 2014 10:10 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: task 2.6
- Replies: 2
- Views: 773
task 2.6
This was a tough subject for me. i just tried my level best. please help me with corrections or suggesting how to develope ideas for this type of questions. It is believed that everyone should have an ambition to become successful in life. Is it really important to have these ambitions? Is being am...
- Wed Sep 03, 2014 7:43 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Could you please correct my essay and provide feedback
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1462
Re: Could you please correct my essay and provide feedback
hi Your essay is organised in well manner. sentences are linked together in beautiful way. paragraphs have cohesion. what the problem i can see in here is that in your first BP, you wrote a quote related to failure and then you related that to experience. But, the connection between failure and expe...
- Wed Sep 03, 2014 7:06 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: does the advantages outweighs the disadvantages?
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1247
Re: does the advantages outweighs the disadvantages?
hi It is advisable that you answer those questions in discussion essay format. Though that question is for an argument, examiner really expect a two sided discussion from candidates. You can find more information from Ryan's videos in youtube or ielts simons. You have to write about the side which y...
- Tue Sep 02, 2014 11:51 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: essay 2.5
- Replies: 0
- Views: 723
essay 2.5
The qualities a person needs to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Life style lead by people today has been changed so far from the past. Similarly, the way which defined the success of life i...
- Mon Sep 01, 2014 8:35 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: task 2.4
- Replies: 0
- Views: 407
task 2.4
Today‘s children are living under more pressure from the society than children in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Life style of humanity has been changed over the time. It has been argued by many that such changes made the life of children more tensed than in the...
- Sun Aug 31, 2014 11:09 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: task 2.3
- Replies: 2
- Views: 824
task 2.3
Some people think it is better for children to begin to learn a foreign language at primary school than at secondary school. What‘s your opinion? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ? In this modern century, it is more common that a second language starts in high school curriculum...
- Sat Aug 30, 2014 9:11 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: task 2.2
- Replies: 1
- Views: 575
task 2.2
Many people think it is important to protect the environment, but they make no effort on it themselves. Why is it and what your opinion? Environmental protection is a topic which is more pronounced by today’s media. Despite the knowledge in the importance of keeping the nature safe, people are reluc...
- Thu Aug 28, 2014 9:17 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Task-II:Dependence on computers. For review, please.
- Replies: 2
- Views: 982
Re: Task-II:Dependence on computers. For review, please.
Early Computers were large enough to occupied space of a single room. (I would say this is an off topic sentence) With the advent of silicon chip, size of computers gets shrinked which remarkably increases its portability.(it is not only the size caused popularity of computer,but also its efficienc...
- Thu Aug 28, 2014 8:49 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: test
- Replies: 1
- Views: 482
Re: test
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- Thu Aug 28, 2014 8:40 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: please comment my essay CHILDREN COMPETITION
- Replies: 7
- Views: 1615
Re: please comment my essay CHILDREN COMPETITION
The controversy around the competition is one of the most debated topics in society affairs. Some advocate that this sense should be built up since very young ages, while other argue that children who are taught to be co-operative become exemplar citizens ( doesnt feel right structure in here., maki...
- Wed Aug 27, 2014 11:00 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: task 2
- Replies: 1
- Views: 518
task 2
many businesses now ban smoking from all offices and governments prohibit it in all public places. This is a good idea but it has restricted our freedom.To what extent do you agree or disagree? Tobacco can be considered as a drug due to its properties of addiction. Apart from that, finding of hazard...
- Wed Aug 27, 2014 9:34 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: task 2
- Replies: 1
- Views: 873
task 2
SUCCESSFUL SPORTS PROFESSIONALS CAN EARN A GREAT DEAL MORE MONEY THAN PEOPLE IN OTHER IMPORTANT PROFESSIONS. SOME PEOPLE THINK IT IS FULLY JUSTIFIED WHILE OTHERS THINK IT IS UNFAIR. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION. We are living in a world where the symmetry of wage is varied profession to ...
- Wed Aug 27, 2014 10:59 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: please comment on my essay nd give me a feedback
- Replies: 2
- Views: 838
Re: please comment on my essay nd give me a feedback
OUR SOCIETY IS A CURIOUS NETWORK OF DIFFERENT PERSONS.THERE ARE DOCTORS, ENGINEERS. TEACHERS, ARCHITECTS, LAWYERS AND SHOW PROFESSIONS WHO EARN DIFFERENT AMOUNT OF MONEY BASED ON THEIR PROFESSION .THIS CAN BE SEEN NOWHERE CLEAR THAT SUCCESSFUL SPORTS PROFESSIONALS WILL EARN A GREAT AMOUNT OFMONEY TH...
- Mon Aug 25, 2014 5:34 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: task 2 difficult topic
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1243
Re: task 2 difficult topic
Ohh. I am sorry to hear that. Me neither last time. I didnt see any task failure in this essay. Im sure , this time you will rock it man. All the best, but try to upload essays whenever it is possible. I will help you as much as I can. If you want, you can mail me at robin22y@gmail.com or robin22y i...
- Mon Aug 25, 2014 10:43 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: task 2 difficult topic
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1243
Re: task 2 difficult topic
hi durai I am glad to see you after a while. You have improved a lot in your writing, I must say. the only humble suggestion I can say in here is to re-order the paragraphs you wrote. I mean, make the second body paragraph as your first body paragraph. Because, the basic human right is a very strong...
- Sat Aug 23, 2014 4:23 pm
- Forum: IELTS related discussion
- Topic: robib
- Replies: 0
- Views: 511
robib
Hi im robin. From india. Looking for a partner in studies . Interested one can contact me through robin22y@gmail.com
Robin22y in skype
Robin22y in skype
- Sat Aug 23, 2014 4:17 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: looking for a study partner
- Replies: 0
- Views: 378
looking for a study partner
Hi there
I would like to have someone who is going to write IELTS ACADEMIC
To practice graph and anyone to discuss about essays.
If anybody is interested can send me a mail to robin22y@gmail.com
Or through skype robin22y
I would like to have someone who is going to write IELTS ACADEMIC
To practice graph and anyone to discuss about essays.
If anybody is interested can send me a mail to robin22y@gmail.com
Or through skype robin22y
- Tue Aug 19, 2014 10:01 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls assess my first attempt for writing task 1.. T_T
- Replies: 6
- Views: 4003
Re: pls assess my first attempt for writing task 1.. T_T
The graph illustrates the cost payed (paid) on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austira (Austria) within the year of 1995 and 2005 in a time period between the years 1995 and 2005 In Germany, a modest increase was shown in the year 1995 to 1999, which clearly states from 80 million US dollars to ...
- Tue Aug 19, 2014 9:04 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: IELTS GT Writing Task 2 - Please assess my essay
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2256
Re: IELTS GT Writing Task 2 - Please assess my essay
Of many key aspects of dynamic student life, part-time work is an important one. Students work, (no need of comma during weekends or breaks, according to their skill-set. However, It is not an individual mandate to work while studying, students are free to make this decision. Firstly, part-time jobs...
- Mon Aug 18, 2014 6:15 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: please correct it and i appreciate your suggestions for it
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2032
Re: please correct it and i appreciate your suggestions for
Well ,actually , i dont know what my skype id is. I think it is robin22y and robin20y. Just look on both.
Or just contact me through mail robin22y@gmail.com.
thank you
Or just contact me through mail robin22y@gmail.com.
thank you
- Mon Aug 18, 2014 12:02 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Could you please make comments on my writing?
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1019
Re: Could you please make comments on my writing?
Topic: Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. (in Test 1-Cam 8) Education has long been one of the most important factor s in building...