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obesity is a growing concern of our modern society . it has been observed that adults and children both are affected by obesity more than previous years. ( In these days,it has been observed that both adults and children are being obese than in the past ). in this essay we will look into some of the...

"Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up." To what extent do you agree or disagree? I believe that child- ...

Decades after the decline of communism, we find ourselves living in a liberalist(LIBERATED) society that reasonably promotes the idea of free speaking and liberty in seizing our very own decisions. Liberalism came after times of hardness and the massive hindrance precipitated by the communist regime...

The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the possible causes and effects of this disturbing trend and offer a solution. Obesity among children is indeed becoming more common ." Child obesity is more common in these days ...

you recently stayed at a hotel and one of the staff was very helpful, write a letter to hotel manager, explain the situation and say what you want the manager to do Dear Manager, I am John and had visited at your hotel from 01/06/2014 to 30/07/2014.I was stayed first time at your hotel in Singapore ...

Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, inspite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own ...

HI PIAZZI Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment in essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Fear is one of the strongest feelings present in our contempo...

Hi saravanan I think you should pay more attention to your writing. first of all, the question seems a bit odd to me. Your essay goes in a speaking manner. You should change it to the writing style. Here you are not talking to somebody. Ok, so chose the language style appropriately. Spelling errors ...

Use sufficient paragrapghing for essays.
Introduction 4 sentences
body para 1 4 sentences
Body para 2 4 sentences
Coclusion 3 sentences

Hi saqib I think you are a newbie in IELTS. So, I recommend you to go through ryans videos on essay structures. Because, you have included many ideas in a paragraph, which is not correct when essay needs a particular point in each paragraph. Secondly, this essay is away from topic. The question is o...

Hi durai
I believe that personal pronouns should be omitted unless the question asks directly for that; such as, use your own life experience etc..Otherwise essays would seem like the writing of a school student.

what is your name? :) what should i call you? :) can i see your ID please? ;) where you are from? :) do you work or study? :D did you always wanted to do this job? why? :o do you like shopping? why? :idea: did you purchase anything online? why? :mrgreen: describe something positive experience in you...

Some say that due to heavy traffic governments need to build more roads in metropolitan cities, while others argue this isn’t the right solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your reasons and examples. Packed roads with vehicles is a common view in bigger cities. This is an issue wh...

hi jhonson,
you have done a good job in my view. I think even if we get 7 for our task 2, errors in task one may affect the entire score. i don't know, but i think like that.
all the best jhonson.

Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employers. Agree or disagree? Telecommuting is a concept which evolved with advancements in i...

The following pie charts show the results of a survey into the most popular leisure activities in the United States of America in 1999 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Given pie...

sending criminals to prison is not the best method of dealing with them. education and job training are better ways to help them. Do you agree or disagree? Since the dawn of the history, imprisonment remains as a major form of sentence to criminals. However, recently, some people regard jail sentenc...

thank you flick. thank you very much.

hi durai
many thanks for your advise. I'm trying to change those serious errors in my writing. if you have time, could you please go through my newly posted essay( noted as task 2) and suggest me something.
thankfully
robin

People who fail at school will often succeed in adult life. Why it is happening? Give reasons and also give some examples. Since the dawn of history, it is common that some low achievers in academic education prosper in their adulthood. A detailed study on this subject would be helpful to find the ...

Some people think that students go to college for further education. However, some others claim that students should go to learn the skills such as fixing cars or construction. What is your opinion? Basic school education is mandatory for all in most part of the world. However, there are no strict f...

Hi Durai. You are doing a good job really. I love the simplicity of your writing. Also it is quiet easy to the reader to understand your writing. In the opening sentence, can we use all over the world instead of world over?. I think that will add some color to the writing isn't it? Likely, instead o...

Dear neha I would like to say you that I'm not an expert in reviews. However, i can help you with in the limitations of my abilities. The first thing i can notice in your writing is that in certain places, your punctuation's are either incorrect or no punctuation at all. Secondly your ideas are soun...

hi
your ideas are good. try to short the sentences. punctuation needs to be focused.
I'm not an expert, however, I'm just trying to help you out from the mistakes i can spot. the second paragraph needs to be rephrased in my view.
otherwise good work

i wish ..i could write like this. anyway i think you can short your sentences a little bit. some sentence consists more than 30 words.