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by Johnson zhang
Wed Aug 05, 2015 10:27 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Any child can be taught to become good?
Replies: 1
Views: 830

Any child can be taught to become good?

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Many people agre...
by Johnson zhang
Wed Aug 05, 2015 10:11 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Self-confidence is the most important factor?
Replies: 1
Views: 15454

Self-confidence is the most important factor?

Q. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Self-confidence is the most important factor for success in school or at work. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Some people say that success has many important factors such as hard work and intelligence. I believe t...
by Johnson zhang
Tue Jul 21, 2015 12:37 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please Rate this Essay
Replies: 2
Views: 1049

Re: Please Rate this Essay

and this is a rather difficult question to answer
by Johnson zhang
Tue Jul 21, 2015 12:23 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please Rate this Essay
Replies: 2
Views: 1049

Re: Please Rate this Essay

an excellent essay.

yes. this will surely get a 9 if it shows up at an examiner's desktop,
by Johnson zhang
Sun May 03, 2015 6:52 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my writing. 2nd Essay
Replies: 7
Views: 2396

Re: Please evaluate my writing. 2nd Essay

Those are great points made by Mat.
by Johnson zhang
Sun May 03, 2015 6:33 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my essay (targeting 8+)
Replies: 2
Views: 1578

Re: Please evaluate my essay (targeting 8+)

Some people say that public libraries should be free, otherwise they are just a waste of money, especially because modern technologies and the internet allow easy access to resources. Discuss and give your point of view Today technology has taken leaps forward and education sector is one of its ben...
by Johnson zhang
Mon Mar 02, 2015 2:42 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 1 - Line graph
Replies: 3
Views: 1150

Re: Writing Task 1 - Line graph

I will give a go


The line graph shows four countries' yearly book expenditure from 1995 to 2005. During this period, readers of these countries had increased their spending on books on a yearly basis.
by Johnson zhang
Sat Feb 28, 2015 5:54 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Academic Writing Task 1
Replies: 4
Views: 2717

Re: Academic Writing Task 1

not bad.

in your first para, your 2nd sentence should be highlighting the most significant finding. Yours did not.
by Johnson zhang
Sat Feb 28, 2015 5:48 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: can this give me band 7.5
Replies: 2
Views: 1086

Re: can this give me band 7.5

I didn't count 250 words. did you?

No this could not let you have a 7.5...
by Johnson zhang
Fri Feb 27, 2015 7:47 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS Writting Task 2 , Kindly grade and identify errors
Replies: 3
Views: 2039

Re: IELTS Writting Task 2 , Kindly grade and identify errors

what is the question?

I read it. It is pretty good. But some sentences are fundamentally wrong... Grammar is poor. You should proofread it again.
by Johnson zhang
Tue Feb 24, 2015 1:01 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2. Please assess my writing
Replies: 1
Views: 1202

Re: Writing task 2. Please assess my writing

Some British families decide not to buy televisions because they influence the development of the creativity of children. What do you think? With the rapid development of science and technology, television, an innovation of the 20th century, is becoming more popular in modern societies. Due to that...
by Johnson zhang
Tue Feb 24, 2015 12:34 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please assess my writing. Thank you all
Replies: 4
Views: 1133

Re: Please assess my writing. Thank you all

*) Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this is would have litter effect on the public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these and give your opinion. Public health is one of the...
by Johnson zhang
Mon Feb 23, 2015 2:29 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Pls Verify my Essay .
Replies: 3
Views: 1453

Re: Pls grade my essay for Task 2

Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past. Do you Agree or Disagree ? The demand of modern lifestyles, keeping people intensely busy. And this can immens...
by Johnson zhang
Mon Feb 23, 2015 2:18 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls rate! Missing bank card in envelope
Replies: 3
Views: 1476

Re: pls rate! Missing bank card in envelope

You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to...
by Johnson zhang
Fri Feb 13, 2015 9:07 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task - Will appreciate inputs - Aiming fr HI BAND
Replies: 9
Views: 3087

Re: Writing Task - Will appreciate inputs - Aiming fr HI BAN

yes. this essay is at the 7 level. I thought you wanted a 8. I was just not sure it was good enough to get an 8.
I detect your sensitivity in taking criticism. I will leave you alone then.
by Johnson zhang
Tue Feb 10, 2015 2:32 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: I welcome any comment for my writing. :)
Replies: 5
Views: 1254

Re: I welcome any comment for my writing. :)

Task 2: Children should take some lessons outside of classroom like visiting companies of public building. To what extend do you agree or disagree? A) One of the highly controversial issues today relates to kids have to receive some outside education activities. There are those who maintain that ou...
by Johnson zhang
Tue Feb 10, 2015 12:24 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task - Will appreciate inputs - Aiming fr HI BAND
Replies: 9
Views: 3087

Re: Writing Task - Will appreciate inputs - Aiming fr HI BAN

I thought I made it clear. Your punctuation isn't good. in my opinion, you didn't fully address the questions. (my ideas) para 1, I think the main reason why some parents want to teach their children at home is because they can save tuition fees. para 2, I don't think all children should go to a sch...
by Johnson zhang
Mon Feb 09, 2015 4:11 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: pls give me a band score for Task 1
Replies: 4
Views: 2260

Re: pls give me a band score for Task 1

There is a swimming pool proposed to be built in your town. Write to the city council and say - Why is this swimming pool important to you? - Suggest where it should be built. - Why is it a good idea to have a swimming pool in the town and not outside of town? Dear Sir/Madam, I am delighted to lear...
by Johnson zhang
Sun Feb 08, 2015 6:34 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task - Will appreciate inputs - Aiming fr HI BAND
Replies: 9
Views: 3087

Re: Writing Task - Will appreciate inputs - Aiming fr HI BAN

Some families have opted to teach their children at home. Why do you think this is? In your opinion, do you think that all children should be taught in school environment? Say why you think home schooling would not be a good idea and also point out some benefits for this chosen form of education. f...
by Johnson zhang
Fri Feb 06, 2015 9:03 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please review my GT Writing task 2
Replies: 4
Views: 1585

Re: Please review my GT Writing task 2

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------...
by Johnson zhang
Wed Feb 04, 2015 10:36 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please, check my Writing Task2!!! I have an exam this month.
Replies: 3
Views: 1310

Re: Please, check my Writing Task2!!! I have an exam this mo

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? [/u] Some professionals tend to think that it is more appropriate appropriacy is the reason why children nee...
by Johnson zhang
Wed Feb 04, 2015 9:45 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: could this essay score 7.5 ?
Replies: 3
Views: 2227

Re: could this essay score 7.5 ?

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age and should spend most of their time on school studies. Others believe that young children should spend most of their time playing. Compare these two views. Which v...
by Johnson zhang
Wed Feb 04, 2015 9:36 am
Forum: Post your success story
Topic: For so long i have struggled, i finally got it.
Replies: 3
Views: 10273

Re: For so long i have struggled, i finally got it.

Hi anil, go to his youtube channel, I believe he has grouped relevant videos together. Go through them first, and go through them again with a purpose that is to take down your own notes for each genre of Ielts writing. Use your notes to assist you to practise writing. Lastly, get them evaluated by ...
by Johnson zhang
Fri Jan 23, 2015 5:22 am
Forum: Post your success story
Topic: For so long i have struggled, i finally got it.
Replies: 3
Views: 10273

For so long i have struggled, i finally got it.

Hi all, I needed to get 4 7-s in each section to meet the requirement from Aus immigration for permanent residency. A number of attempts have been made across a time span of 3 years.I failed so many times, I felt I was in a perpetual circle of despair. Ryan really helped me. He helped me last year t...
by Johnson zhang
Thu Jan 08, 2015 5:03 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: technology--working at home
Replies: 1
Views: 786

Re: technology--working at home

An increasing number of organizations have allowed people work at home. Is it a positive or negative phenomenon? Upside: time consuming, cost-effective, environmental friendly Downside: work-life balance, easy distraction According to the fact reads better without this bit that computer technology ...