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- Wed Aug 05, 2015 10:27 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Any child can be taught to become good?
- Replies: 1
- Views: 830
Any child can be taught to become good?
It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Many people agre...
- Wed Aug 05, 2015 10:11 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Self-confidence is the most important factor?
- Replies: 1
- Views: 15454
Self-confidence is the most important factor?
Q. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Self-confidence is the most important factor for success in school or at work. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Some people say that success has many important factors such as hard work and intelligence. I believe t...
- Tue Jul 21, 2015 12:37 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please Rate this Essay
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1049
Re: Please Rate this Essay
and this is a rather difficult question to answer
- Tue Jul 21, 2015 12:23 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please Rate this Essay
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1049
Re: Please Rate this Essay
an excellent essay.
yes. this will surely get a 9 if it shows up at an examiner's desktop,
yes. this will surely get a 9 if it shows up at an examiner's desktop,
- Sun May 03, 2015 6:52 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please evaluate my writing. 2nd Essay
- Replies: 7
- Views: 2396
Re: Please evaluate my writing. 2nd Essay
Those are great points made by Mat.
- Sun May 03, 2015 6:33 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please evaluate my essay (targeting 8+)
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1578
Re: Please evaluate my essay (targeting 8+)
Some people say that public libraries should be free, otherwise they are just a waste of money, especially because modern technologies and the internet allow easy access to resources. Discuss and give your point of view Today technology has taken leaps forward and education sector is one of its ben...
- Mon Mar 02, 2015 2:42 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Writing Task 1 - Line graph
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1150
Re: Writing Task 1 - Line graph
I will give a go
The line graph shows four countries' yearly book expenditure from 1995 to 2005. During this period, readers of these countries had increased their spending on books on a yearly basis.
The line graph shows four countries' yearly book expenditure from 1995 to 2005. During this period, readers of these countries had increased their spending on books on a yearly basis.
- Sat Feb 28, 2015 5:54 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Academic Writing Task 1
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2717
Re: Academic Writing Task 1
not bad.
in your first para, your 2nd sentence should be highlighting the most significant finding. Yours did not.
in your first para, your 2nd sentence should be highlighting the most significant finding. Yours did not.
- Sat Feb 28, 2015 5:48 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: can this give me band 7.5
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1086
Re: can this give me band 7.5
I didn't count 250 words. did you?
No this could not let you have a 7.5...
No this could not let you have a 7.5...
- Fri Feb 27, 2015 7:47 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: IELTS Writting Task 2 , Kindly grade and identify errors
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2039
Re: IELTS Writting Task 2 , Kindly grade and identify errors
what is the question?
I read it. It is pretty good. But some sentences are fundamentally wrong... Grammar is poor. You should proofread it again.
I read it. It is pretty good. But some sentences are fundamentally wrong... Grammar is poor. You should proofread it again.
- Tue Feb 24, 2015 1:01 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Writing task 2. Please assess my writing
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1202
Re: Writing task 2. Please assess my writing
Some British families decide not to buy televisions because they influence the development of the creativity of children. What do you think? With the rapid development of science and technology, television, an innovation of the 20th century, is becoming more popular in modern societies. Due to that...
- Tue Feb 24, 2015 12:34 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please assess my writing. Thank you all
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1133
Re: Please assess my writing. Thank you all
*) Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this is would have litter effect on the public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these and give your opinion. Public health is one of the...
- Mon Feb 23, 2015 2:29 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Pls Verify my Essay .
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1453
Re: Pls grade my essay for Task 2
Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past. Do you Agree or Disagree ? The demand of modern lifestyles, keeping people intensely busy. And this can immens...
- Mon Feb 23, 2015 2:18 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls rate! Missing bank card in envelope
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1476
Re: pls rate! Missing bank card in envelope
You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to...
- Fri Feb 13, 2015 9:07 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Writing Task - Will appreciate inputs - Aiming fr HI BAND
- Replies: 9
- Views: 3087
Re: Writing Task - Will appreciate inputs - Aiming fr HI BAN
yes. this essay is at the 7 level. I thought you wanted a 8. I was just not sure it was good enough to get an 8.
I detect your sensitivity in taking criticism. I will leave you alone then.
I detect your sensitivity in taking criticism. I will leave you alone then.
- Tue Feb 10, 2015 2:32 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: I welcome any comment for my writing. :)
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1254
Re: I welcome any comment for my writing. :)
Task 2: Children should take some lessons outside of classroom like visiting companies of public building. To what extend do you agree or disagree? A) One of the highly controversial issues today relates to kids have to receive some outside education activities. There are those who maintain that ou...
- Tue Feb 10, 2015 12:24 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Writing Task - Will appreciate inputs - Aiming fr HI BAND
- Replies: 9
- Views: 3087
Re: Writing Task - Will appreciate inputs - Aiming fr HI BAN
I thought I made it clear. Your punctuation isn't good. in my opinion, you didn't fully address the questions. (my ideas) para 1, I think the main reason why some parents want to teach their children at home is because they can save tuition fees. para 2, I don't think all children should go to a sch...
- Mon Feb 09, 2015 4:11 pm
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: pls give me a band score for Task 1
- Replies: 4
- Views: 2260
Re: pls give me a band score for Task 1
There is a swimming pool proposed to be built in your town. Write to the city council and say - Why is this swimming pool important to you? - Suggest where it should be built. - Why is it a good idea to have a swimming pool in the town and not outside of town? Dear Sir/Madam, I am delighted to lear...
- Sun Feb 08, 2015 6:34 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Writing Task - Will appreciate inputs - Aiming fr HI BAND
- Replies: 9
- Views: 3087
Re: Writing Task - Will appreciate inputs - Aiming fr HI BAN
Some families have opted to teach their children at home. Why do you think this is? In your opinion, do you think that all children should be taught in school environment? Say why you think home schooling would not be a good idea and also point out some benefits for this chosen form of education. f...
- Fri Feb 06, 2015 9:03 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please review my GT Writing task 2
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1585
Re: Please review my GT Writing task 2
Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------...
- Wed Feb 04, 2015 10:36 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: Please, check my Writing Task2!!! I have an exam this month.
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1310
Re: Please, check my Writing Task2!!! I have an exam this mo
Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? [/u] Some professionals tend to think that it is more appropriate appropriacy is the reason why children nee...
- Wed Feb 04, 2015 9:45 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: could this essay score 7.5 ?
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2227
Re: could this essay score 7.5 ?
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age and should spend most of their time on school studies. Others believe that young children should spend most of their time playing. Compare these two views. Which v...
- Wed Feb 04, 2015 9:36 am
- Forum: Post your success story
- Topic: For so long i have struggled, i finally got it.
- Replies: 3
- Views: 10273
Re: For so long i have struggled, i finally got it.
Hi anil, go to his youtube channel, I believe he has grouped relevant videos together. Go through them first, and go through them again with a purpose that is to take down your own notes for each genre of Ielts writing. Use your notes to assist you to practise writing. Lastly, get them evaluated by ...
- Fri Jan 23, 2015 5:22 am
- Forum: Post your success story
- Topic: For so long i have struggled, i finally got it.
- Replies: 3
- Views: 10273
For so long i have struggled, i finally got it.
Hi all, I needed to get 4 7-s in each section to meet the requirement from Aus immigration for permanent residency. A number of attempts have been made across a time span of 3 years.I failed so many times, I felt I was in a perpetual circle of despair. Ryan really helped me. He helped me last year t...
- Thu Jan 08, 2015 5:03 am
- Forum: Post your writing
- Topic: technology--working at home
- Replies: 1
- Views: 786
Re: technology--working at home
An increasing number of organizations have allowed people work at home. Is it a positive or negative phenomenon? Upside: time consuming, cost-effective, environmental friendly Downside: work-life balance, easy distraction According to the fact reads better without this bit that computer technology ...