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Sure Ali. I will try my best . I must admit that writing is my weakness. But still we can learn a lot together by correcting each other tasks.

Thanks Ryan, for your best wishes. This is a classical example that how a person as an examiner can dent your carrier. I cannot express the mental harassment , I underwent . On the other hand , people like you , who are doing selfless service to students . There should be some audit system to check ...

It's my pleasure, Ryan . I am not satisfied with my performance for writing . It was difficult for me to accumulate ideas , vocabulary and finally to give structure to my essay within specified time. I realised, after watching your videos that I need to learn and practice a lot in order to improve m...

All students should attend school untill eighteen .

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?


The graph was on past and prospective GDP of a country in percentages spent for three resources like health , education and transport . Between 2000 and 2025.

I was asking about IELTS test centre ?

From which centre? Take care of time limits . It appears a long answer . Time is the most killing factor in exam. I think , this exam tests your nerves rather than english. I have tried my version in 45 minutes . Read and let me know your views. Due to Globalization, it is not uncommon to see peopl...

I Know what you mean . See that question is asking u clearly that is it a positive devlopment or negative developement ? You can answer this q at the beginning in your mind that which side u want to favour. Argument style does not mean that u r arguing , infact you are structuring your answer in thi...

your thesis is not very clear and examples are not appearing as if they are proving your point of view. Appears confusion in ideas.

your ideas and cohesion is good .

It has nice structure and concept is clear to me . well done . of course , there is always a scope of improvement .

Hi Bunni , I think its easy to answer this q in argument style and you take a stand in the beginning . It saves your time and avoids lot of grammatical error . Also try to avoid personal prepositions to make it more academic . This is what i understood from ryans video. Now a days, mobile phones can...

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Hi Bunny , welcome to the forum . I read your para once . At my first reading , It was not very clear to me the continuity of thought process . I mean it lacks coehesion . There are multiple examples . Your point of view is not very obvious and it is difficult to interpret your main idea.There are g...

Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior; others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. Nowadays, Tourism and Globalization has resulted in extensive migration a...

when the question says do u think disadvantages outweighs advantages ?

Is it necessary to write more disadvantages or we can disagree also ?

Tried to reframe essay. please review my essay . Some people think that good health is a basic human need medical the government instead of profit-making companies should run service. Do you think the disadvantages of private health care outweigh the advantages? Health and education are basic human...

I still feel that I am not reaching to the core of the essay topic . Something is grossly wrong in my approach in answering such question. Please help , if you can .

Dear Saran , another attempt . Please review my essay . Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Nowadays, Change in life is almost inevitable rather ...

Reframed essay, Waiting for your criticism.Thanks Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Nowadays, change in life is almost inevitable rather than a...

Thanks , it's really helpful for me .

Thanks a lot Saran for valuable suggestions. you know the most difficult thing i faced here is to give proper structure to my essay . I knew it was weird . Please help me to frame the outline of such q when they ask views of both sides. Introduction : PARA 1 : taking about the concept of static life...

You r most welcome Saran . In fact everyone . Instead of crying after loosing in exam , hit my essay as hard as possible now . I will be grateful to u .
I was also thinking the same phrase while writing but got so confused at the end .
Please come up with your criticism .

Hi there , I request you to give your suggestions . I tried to follow Ryans instructions but it was impossible to follow that in limited period of time at this stage of my prepration. Infact I got so confused that how to complete given task . We cant do it like argument question as it is asking to e...

Thanks a lot . I completely agree with you . I think in exam they will clearly show the values in details as it was not displayed in this chart . Still thanks for your advice .

More criticism is encouraged .

Dear Ryan, Here is my essay written with the topic on your website. I know you are very busy, so I don't ask for your favour to correct it. However, if you have some time, please have a look at the essay and let me know the score in your opinion. Thanks a lot TOPIC: Should children go to nursery sch...