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without a cars = i don't think you can use the article 'a' for plural things. it should be a car or just cars this makes it clear that why the idea = "that" should be omitted - you sometimes forget to use punctuation. ex. Because of this, it is clear why the argument For instance, pollutio...

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Hi Ali, I took the exams twice already as well. I will be taking it this October again and I am hoping to get an 8 in all areas. On my last two attempts I tried studying on my own. Ryan's videos were really helpful, for I got 6.5 and 7.5 on my writing. Though I think it is possible to nail the exams...

hi rukshana, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MFn4S3z_WO4. have you watched this video? this helped me a lot on the exams. there is a chance you might feel nervous and this will help you get through it. Just make sure you use variety of sentence structures. i used this format on my first ielts exam an...

i think this is essay is a lot better than your essay about crime rate. i think you only made few mistakes. 1. Tourism and Globalization (has) = isn't it supposed to be have for there are two subjects. 2. the way you present your examples.- it should be "for example, Mecca, or Take mecca for ex...

Hi tina, Here are some of the errors I noticed: The increase in the crime rate - the increase in crime rate. "no need to use the in crime rate" gender inequalities - gender inequality (for i think you are just describing one thing, which is inequality among sexes. poverty and gender inequa...

another thing, make sure you use different sentence structures. make use of the conjunctions. http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/conjunctions.htm. hope this helps.

Thanks buni and tina. I wrote this a long time ago and I did not bother to check it for errors. I actually don't think that my supporting ideas were strong enough. Now that I am reading it again, I think I used "which" too much ,and, sometimes, inappropriately. I also failed on the paralle...

Hi rukshana. Goodluck with your exams. I took ielts twice already, and, as an experienced ielts taker, my advice is to make sure you save a little time at the end to check for errors. I was so confident on my first take because I knew that I followed Ryan's advice on how to structure my essay. I am ...

hi bunni015. first of all I want to commend you for a very nice essay. I think your vocabulary is really good, but, correct me if i am wrong, I believe that you inappropriately used some words and commas. A Discussion Essay. In today's lifestyle, mobile phones have become an integral part of every p...

hi everyone, Good day to you all. My name is Crissy and I am from the Philippines but presently working in Canada. I will be taking ielts, for the third time :(, this October. I was .5 point short from the band score that I needed from both of my previous exams. On my first try, i passed all areas e...

Cultural tourism, in which people travel in order to visit museums, monuments and archaeological sites among other things, is a growing industry. Having so many visitors may sometimes benefit a nations’s cultural heritage, but it can also cause problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with ...