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by itsdeepesh
Tue Jul 08, 2014 2:42 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Tasks 1 and 2 Academic - Could you please give comments?
Replies: 14
Views: 4151

Re: Tasks 1 and 2 Academic - Could you please give comments?

Liked it. Few points, which I read somewhere, may help you - 1. In Para-3-Task 2 - Instead of "inefficient", it should be inefficient solution. 2. It could have been better to cut short the length of 3rd paragraph, as it was just detailing same idea. The additional time can be used as usin...
by itsdeepesh
Wed Jul 02, 2014 4:20 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 > Compulsory teaching of a foreign language
Replies: 7
Views: 4873

Re: Task 2 > Compulsory teaching of a foreign language

Although essay is good in terms of structure and vocabulary range, I personally felt introduction should have been more clear. Opinion and your stand should be clear in Introduction.
by itsdeepesh
Wed Jul 02, 2014 1:53 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Can anyone comment and rate my essay please?
Replies: 1
Views: 1399

Can anyone comment and rate my essay please?

Can anyone check and rate this essay, please ? I welcome your feedback. In some countries, young people of eighteen years are allowed to do things such as vote, drive car, or marry. In some other countries they have to be older. What you think the age should be to take adult responsibilities? Every ...
by itsdeepesh
Wed Jul 02, 2014 1:51 am
Forum: Latest IELTS questions
Topic: writing questions 21st june INDIA
Replies: 15
Views: 7984

Re: writing questions 21st june INDIA

Can anyone check and rate this essay, please ? I welcome your feedback. In Some countries, young people of eighteen years are allowed to do things such as vote, drive car, or marry. In some other countries they have to be older. What you think the age should be to take adult responsibilities? Every ...