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by goldcoastielts
Thu Oct 22, 2020 9:20 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 writing. Please evaluate my response.
Replies: 3
Views: 8378

Re: Task 2 writing. Please evaluate my response.

Hi there! Good question! :ugeek: I think no matter how much grammar and vocabulary you study, you will never be able to get perfect phrasing. HOWEVER, I think the two best ways to improve your phrasing are to read a lot of good books, and take notice of the phrasing that you like and think you could...
by goldcoastielts
Wed Oct 21, 2020 11:03 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 writing. Please evaluate my response.
Replies: 3
Views: 8378

Re: Task 2 writing. Please evaluate my response.

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by goldcoastielts
Wed Oct 21, 2020 7:57 am
Forum: IELTS preparation resources
Topic: YouTube : "IELTS task 2 5-sentence body paragraph"
Replies: 0
Views: 26449

YouTube : "IELTS task 2 5-sentence body paragraph"

Hi ! ;) https://youtu.be/rklq2jSmHGg In the last task 2 video I showed you how to write a simple 4-sentence IELTS body paragraph. In this video we explore the 5-sentence body paragraph.. In this YouTube video you'll learn how to write IELTS task 2 paragraphs with : S1 : Topic sentence S2 : Idea 1 S3...
by goldcoastielts
Wed Oct 21, 2020 7:53 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Academic task 1 writing. Please evaluate my report
Replies: 3
Views: 8487

Re: Academic task 1 writing. Please evaluate my report

Yes good question!

I think it depends how you look at the question. I think you are right! Maybe I marked it a little too quickly... :o

Another way to look at it would be to write about both charts in the past tense.

I think both ways are OK. :ugeek:
by goldcoastielts
Wed Oct 21, 2020 7:48 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please evaluate writing task 1 General
Replies: 3
Views: 8600

Re: please evaluate writing task 1 General

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by goldcoastielts
Tue Oct 20, 2020 12:03 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Academic task 1 writing. Please evaluate my report
Replies: 3
Views: 8487

Re: Academic task 1 writing. Please evaluate my report

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by goldcoastielts
Sun Oct 18, 2020 1:07 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: please review Writing task 1 for general
Replies: 1
Views: 8109

Re: please review Writing task 1 for general

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by goldcoastielts
Sun Oct 18, 2020 12:48 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2 response. Kindly evaluate
Replies: 3
Views: 8932

Re: Writing task 2 response. Kindly evaluate

Awesome! Glad I could help you my friend. Good luck with the test... :ugeek:
by goldcoastielts
Sat Oct 17, 2020 6:14 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2 response. Kindly evaluate
Replies: 3
Views: 8932

Re: Writing task 2 response. Kindly evaluate

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by goldcoastielts
Fri Oct 16, 2020 3:57 am
Forum: IELTS preparation resources
Topic: YouTube : "IELTS task 1 linking phrases"
Replies: 0
Views: 26599

YouTube : "IELTS task 1 linking phrases"

Hi ! ;) https://youtu.be/Z4RRxefhOds "Cohesion and coherence" or "LINKING" accounts for 25% of your IELTS writing score. See how to do it properly! In this YouTube video you'll learn IELTS task 1 linking language for: i) Introducing a chart ii) Describing a whole table iii) Givin...
by goldcoastielts
Tue Oct 13, 2020 2:40 am
Forum: IELTS preparation resources
Topic: YouTube : "COMPARING DATA in an IELTS Task 1"
Replies: 0
Views: 26770

YouTube : "COMPARING DATA in an IELTS Task 1"

Hi ! ;) https://youtu.be/_Od7KzU_Umo In the IELTS task 1 you have to describe AND COMPARE. A lot of people forget the comparing part and miss out on a lot of easy points. Don't be one of them! In this YouTube video you'll learn how to: 1. Use SIX different structures to compare data in the IELTS tas...
by goldcoastielts
Mon Oct 12, 2020 11:56 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: writing task 2 please evaluate
Replies: 2
Views: 8731

Re: writing task 2 please evaluate

Thanks leo7.5!!!! Please see my rewrite below ... :ugeek: :P FREEBIES: YouTube : "IELTS Task 2 - 4-SENTENCE BODY PARAGRAPH" :arrow: https://youtu.be/URgbF79DfqU IELTS Task 1 Process Essay Worksheet :arrow: https://www.goldcoastielts.com/process-essay-worksheet INTRO: (VERY VERY GOOD!) :D ...
by goldcoastielts
Sun Oct 11, 2020 11:31 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: writing task 2 please evaluate
Replies: 2
Views: 8731

Re: writing task 2 please evaluate

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by goldcoastielts
Sun Oct 11, 2020 12:17 am
Forum: IELTS preparation resources
Topic: YouTube : "4-sentence body paragraph"
Replies: 0
Views: 26308

YouTube : "4-sentence body paragraph"

Hi ! ;) https://youtu.be/URgbF79DfqU Who is having trouble writing IELTS task 2 body paragraphs?? In this video I will show you how to write the easiest kind of body paragraph. In this YouTube video you'll learn how to: 1. Write a simple 4-sentence body paragraph 2. Change the third sentence so it f...
by goldcoastielts
Sun Oct 11, 2020 12:12 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate task 2
Replies: 1
Views: 8211

Re: Please evaluate task 2

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by goldcoastielts
Sat Oct 10, 2020 2:27 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: writinf Task 2 Please eveluate
Replies: 3
Views: 8756

Re: writinf Task 2 Please eveluate

No problem! :ugeek:

Hope it helps you ...
by goldcoastielts
Thu Oct 08, 2020 10:58 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: writinf Task 2 Please eveluate
Replies: 3
Views: 8756

Re: writinf Task 2 Please eveluate

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by goldcoastielts
Thu Oct 08, 2020 4:07 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: writing task 2 please evaluate
Replies: 1
Views: 8393

Re: writing task 2 please evaluate

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by goldcoastielts
Wed Oct 07, 2020 6:30 am
Forum: IELTS preparation resources
Topic: YouTube : "IELTS Task 1 - "Key Trend Sentence"
Replies: 0
Views: 26365

YouTube : "IELTS Task 1 - "Key Trend Sentence"

Hi ! ;) :arrow: :arrow: https://youtu.be/fDJDuTaIovw In the IELTS task 1 introduction you need to do TWO things: (1) paraphrase the title, and (2) describe the "key trend" :ugeek: In this YouTube video you'll learn how to: 1. Find the key trend in an IELTS task 1 chart, and 2. Write the ke...
by goldcoastielts
Wed Oct 07, 2020 5:38 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing task 2 please evaluate
Replies: 1
Views: 8049

Re: Writing task 2 please evaluate

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by goldcoastielts
Mon Oct 05, 2020 8:17 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: writing task 2 please evaluate
Replies: 1
Views: 8189

Re: writing task 2 please evaluate

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by goldcoastielts
Sun Oct 04, 2020 3:43 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Preparing for IELTS GT: Task 2, Please evaluate
Replies: 1
Views: 7682

Re: Preparing for IELTS GT: Task 2, Please evaluate

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by goldcoastielts
Fri Oct 02, 2020 5:18 am
Forum: IELTS preparation resources
Topic: YouTube : IELTS Task 2 - PLAN
Replies: 0
Views: 26798

YouTube : IELTS Task 2 - PLAN

Hi ! ;) https://youtu.be/HYk8Y35SG0k Without a road map you aren't going anywhere in your car. Without a plan, your IELTS Task 2 essay is also going ABSOLUTELY NOWERE :ugeek: In this video you can learn how to use a brainstorm to write the perfect plan for your IELTS task 2 essay... You'll learn: 1....
by goldcoastielts
Thu Oct 01, 2020 11:38 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 2
Replies: 1
Views: 8079

Re: Writing Task 2

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by goldcoastielts
Wed Sep 30, 2020 11:07 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: writing task 2 please evaluate
Replies: 1
Views: 9426

Re: writing task 2 please evaluate

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