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by goldcoastielts
Mon Aug 31, 2020 2:48 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS Task 2 - Cambridge 15 / Please Evaluate
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Re: IELTS Task 2 - Cambridge 15 / Please Evaluate

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by goldcoastielts
Sun Aug 30, 2020 12:28 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 2 : Evaluation Needed
Replies: 1
Views: 8291

Re: Writing Task 2 : Evaluation Needed

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by goldcoastielts
Sat Aug 29, 2020 12:50 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please Evaluate Writing task 2
Replies: 3
Views: 8998

Re: Please Evaluate Writing task 2

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by goldcoastielts
Fri Aug 28, 2020 10:13 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 2 - Evaluation needed
Replies: 3
Views: 8749

Re: Writing Task 2 - Evaluation needed

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by goldcoastielts
Thu Aug 27, 2020 1:12 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 2 - Evaluation needed
Replies: 3
Views: 8749

Re: Writing Task 2 - Evaluation needed

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by goldcoastielts
Mon Aug 24, 2020 12:57 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my second essay for Task 1
Replies: 1
Views: 18600

Re: Please evaluate my second essay for Task 1

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by goldcoastielts
Thu Aug 20, 2020 4:02 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 2 : Evaluation Needed
Replies: 1
Views: 8021

Re: Writing Task 2 : Evaluation Needed

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by goldcoastielts
Thu Aug 20, 2020 1:35 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Wrting Task 2 : Evaluation Needed
Replies: 1
Views: 7982

Re: Wrting Task 2 : Evaluation Needed

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by goldcoastielts
Tue Aug 18, 2020 2:07 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task1 From IELTS Cambridge 13
Replies: 1
Views: 21516

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by goldcoastielts
Sun Aug 16, 2020 1:45 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Examiner Feedback needed: Actual Writing Task 2 Question attempt
Replies: 1
Views: 16408

Re: Examiner Feedback needed: Actual Writing Task 2 Question attempt

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by goldcoastielts
Sat Aug 15, 2020 2:55 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my writing task 2!!
Replies: 1
Views: 17580

Re: Please evaluate my writing task 2!!

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by goldcoastielts
Thu Aug 13, 2020 11:46 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Supermarket vs. local market
Replies: 1
Views: 16473

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by goldcoastielts
Thu Aug 13, 2020 12:38 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please evaluate my essay
Replies: 1
Views: 17158

Re: Please evaluate my essay

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by goldcoastielts
Wed Aug 12, 2020 12:20 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To
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by goldcoastielts
Tue Aug 11, 2020 2:55 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Please benchmark my essay with band 9
Replies: 1
Views: 18881

Re: Please benchmark my essay with band 9

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by goldcoastielts
Mon Aug 10, 2020 12:54 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Hi All, Please check my essay as i'm sitting for an exam soon Thanks
Replies: 1
Views: 13514

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by goldcoastielts
Mon Aug 10, 2020 12:27 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Many people believe that it is important to always tell the truth. In your opinion, is it ever acceptable to tell a lie?
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Views: 10400

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by goldcoastielts
Sun Aug 09, 2020 12:32 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 1 general feedback needed
Replies: 1
Views: 17833

Re: Task 1 general feedback needed

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by goldcoastielts
Sat Aug 08, 2020 12:57 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS General Test Task 1,Litter, Kindly some one assess it
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Views: 15655

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by goldcoastielts
Sat Aug 08, 2020 12:46 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: task 2: discussion and opinion, please help to assess my writing
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by goldcoastielts
Thu Aug 06, 2020 11:15 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: environmental protection and pollution
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Views: 13231

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by goldcoastielts
Thu Aug 06, 2020 10:56 pm
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Topic: Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in
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Views: 16533

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by goldcoastielts
Thu Aug 06, 2020 12:08 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS writing task 1 - evaluation needed - many thanks
Replies: 2
Views: 14130

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by goldcoastielts
Wed Aug 05, 2020 11:47 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS Writing Task 2
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Views: 15625

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by goldcoastielts
Wed Aug 05, 2020 12:12 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: IELTS Writing Task 2
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Views: 10338

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