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by afaque99
Wed Jan 06, 2021 4:35 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 2 - Please give your valuable feedback!
Replies: 1
Views: 7437

Writing Task 2 - Please give your valuable feedback!

Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view? Essay: With the world facing a number of greater problems, governments are still spending on arts. Some people oppose this kind of spend...
by afaque99
Wed Jan 06, 2021 4:31 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 2 - Please evaluate my essay and give your valuable feedback!
Replies: 3
Views: 8796

Re: Writing Task 2 - Please evaluate my essay and give your valuable feedback!

Hi, goldcoastielts,

Thank you so much for evaluating my essay. Your re-write and comments are really helpful.

Happy New year!
Afaque Siddique
by afaque99
Mon Dec 21, 2020 3:14 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 2 - Please evaluate my essay and give your valuable feedback!
Replies: 3
Views: 8796

Writing Task 2 - Please evaluate my essay and give your valuable feedback!

Some people believe that a person’s intelligence is inherited from the parents, while others believe that their environment is the main factor. Discuss these views. Which factor do you think is mostly responsible for intelligence? You should give reasons for your answer, and include ideas and exampl...
by afaque99
Mon Nov 16, 2020 12:10 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 2 - Please evaluate my essay and give your valuable feedback!
Replies: 1
Views: 8128

Writing Task 2 - Please evaluate my essay and give your valuable feedback!

Question: Some people think that school children should be given various short vacations. Others however believe a long vacation once a year is a better option. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Response: It is supported by some that giving various short vacations to pupils at school is goo...
by afaque99
Mon Nov 09, 2020 8:14 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 2 - Please evaluate my essay and give your valuable feedback!
Replies: 2
Views: 8516

Re: Writing Task 2 - Please evaluate my essay and give your valuable feedback!

Dear Anthony Schultz,

Thank you so much for evaluating my essay. Your detailed feedback is really helpful, and I would surely work on the things that you pointed out.

Thanks once again! :)

Afaque Siddique
by afaque99
Sun Nov 08, 2020 4:09 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 2 - Please evaluate my essay and give your valuable feedback!
Replies: 2
Views: 8516

Writing Task 2 - Please evaluate my essay and give your valuable feedback!

Nowadays, artificial intelligence is being used to drive cars. Why is this happening? Is it a positive or negative development? Response: In recent years, artificial intelligence (AI) is replacing human-drivers to drive automobiles. This is occurring due to the fact that AI makes driving automatic ...
by afaque99
Wed Sep 16, 2020 10:12 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Writing Task 2 - Please give your valuable feedback!
Replies: 1
Views: 7965

Writing Task 2 - Please give your valuable feedback!

Topic: In many countries, prison is considered the best way to decrease crime. However, education is often to be a more effective way. Which opinion do you most agree with? From the history of mankind, prisons existed in one form or the other. In modern society, it is debatable whether education is ...