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by Twinkle
Mon Dec 14, 2020 4:29 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 Influence of adverts. please help!
Replies: 5
Views: 9345

Re: Task 2 Influence of adverts. please help!

Dear Anthony Schultz, I just want to let you know that i took the exam last week and got an amazing band overall 8 and in writing 7. I want to thankyou for your amazing evaluation. You were first person who had actually shown me what were my weaknesses, before that I was so clueless. I have took pro...
by Twinkle
Mon Nov 30, 2020 5:34 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 Influence of adverts. please help!
Replies: 5
Views: 9345

Re: Task 2 Influence of adverts. please help!

thanks a million dear Anthony Schultz. i really appreciate your comments and trying to work on them. I am a medical student and I have cleared licensing exams of the USA. I have applied for a medical residency and I need ielts for that purpose. I have booked 12th December, so fingers crossed. Hopefu...
by Twinkle
Sun Nov 29, 2020 3:05 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 Influence of adverts. please help!
Replies: 5
Views: 9345

Task 2 Influence of adverts. please help!

Some people say the advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. It is considered by some that advertising plays a huge role in our decis...
by Twinkle
Thu Nov 19, 2020 4:57 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 print media will disappear. Please evaluate!
Replies: 1
Views: 8503

Task 2 print media will disappear. Please evaluate!

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? It is predicted that printed magazines and books will become obsolete in the coming years, and everyon...
by Twinkle
Thu Nov 19, 2020 4:51 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 1. Australian tea and coffee drinking habit
Replies: 2
Views: 8775

Re: Task 1. Australian tea and coffee drinking habit

Thanks for your detailed review. I am still trying to get hang of using commas. I will try harder.
by Twinkle
Tue Nov 17, 2020 4:52 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 1. Australian tea and coffee drinking habit
Replies: 2
Views: 8775

Task 1. Australian tea and coffee drinking habit

I am trying to fix my task 1 nowadays. Please help Anthony Schultz, kindly give your advice Screenshot_20201112-120422_Messenger.jpg The given bar graph shares the information about a survey conducted to show how Australian citizens in five different cities consumed coffee and tea in the last four w...
by Twinkle
Sun Nov 15, 2020 12:57 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 1 sports centre renovation. Please help
Replies: 5
Views: 9677

Re: Task 1 sports centre renovation. Please help

Thanks for your detailed answer. I definitely need to up my game. I note down all the corrections u made and will work on them.
by Twinkle
Thu Nov 12, 2020 3:40 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 1 sports centre renovation. Please help
Replies: 5
Views: 9677

Re: Task 1 sports centre renovation. Please help

Thanks rayanm729 for your advice.

Dear Anthony Schultz can u please give your expert comments and a band score. I am planning to book the exam in next two weeks. This is going to be my third attempt. And i really badly need 7 in writing it this time.
by Twinkle
Tue Nov 10, 2020 5:19 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 1 sports centre renovation. Please help
Replies: 5
Views: 9677

Task 1 sports centre renovation. Please help

Screenshot_20201108-182338_Adobe Acrobat.jpg The two floor plans describe the current layout and the future changes that will take place in a University sports centre. Overall, the layouts show the sports centre will undergo major renovations. The two outdoor courts on each side of the centre will ...
by Twinkle
Tue Nov 10, 2020 4:01 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2. Inadequate Sleep. Please review
Replies: 3
Views: 8790

Re: Task 2. Inadequate Sleep. Please review

Thanks a lot for the corrections. Sleep hygiene is a medical term and i have seen it in some articles as well.
by Twinkle
Mon Nov 09, 2020 3:01 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 crime shows: Please help
Replies: 5
Views: 10145

Re: Task 2 crime shows: Please help

Watched the video it's very useful. Thanks once again.
by Twinkle
Mon Nov 09, 2020 12:00 am
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2. Inadequate Sleep. Please review
Replies: 3
Views: 8790

Task 2. Inadequate Sleep. Please review

Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problem can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep? Sleep deprivation is one of the common problems people are experiencing these days. Many people complain that because of improper sleep they are...
by Twinkle
Sun Nov 08, 2020 9:51 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 crime shows: Please help
Replies: 5
Views: 10145

Re: Task 2 crime shows: Please help

Thanks I will
by Twinkle
Fri Oct 30, 2020 12:25 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 crime shows: Please help
Replies: 5
Views: 10145

Re: Task 2 crime shows: Please help

Thanks a lot for your corrections. I always felt that I lacked coherence and cohesion in my essays. I took professional help as well but was never corrected for it. Thanks again.
by Twinkle
Thu Oct 29, 2020 12:38 pm
Forum: Post your writing
Topic: Task 2 crime shows: Please help
Replies: 5
Views: 10145

Task 2 crime shows: Please help

Kindly evaluate and give your comments Most of the people in society enjoy watching crime movies and criminal TV programs. Why do you think people have more interest to watch them? What is the impact on the society due to this? Movies and television shows that are related to crime have become increa...